DISCUSSION -- The 75 word Challenge, April 2011

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I did an "edit" on above message, but it doesn't show. I was questioning the "by half" thing, never heard it before.
Also I think that I now qualify to send PMs
Bob S.
 
Hi, Bob

No idea how much the PM system is used overall, but some of us are perpetual PMers! However, you do need 10 counted posts to use it, so yes, you do now qualify. You don't need to check for messages with the PMs as they should go through to your email, and they flash up in a little box when they arrive, or when you log on if they've come when you're off-line. (That's different from the visitor messages on a profile page, though -- they don't come up like that and have to be checked periodically.) As for Parson, I shouldn't imagine he's ever made a cheap shot in his life, let alone here!

You've lost me on the "by half" thing, though, and I'm too lazy to go back and see who said it.
 
The Spurring Platty - A nice telling of the old classic about getting what you wish for - it's a lovely little piece.

Lucky Lola - Like many of these this month there is a catch in the last line that almost always gives you a gasp or an 'oooh' moment. It seems quite nice and rosey until that last little sentence, quite literally a chill.

Bob S. Sr. - What? Where? When? What happens next? Brilliant little piece this one, good, solid story peppered with ideas and an open ending. Tying in perhaps with the conclusion of the Mesoamerican calendar on December 21st 2012.

Greendkidx - A rather disturbing one this, but in a great way as I read and began to realise what was going on, I just could not believe it. A superb if somewhat disturbing entry.

Mosaix - Just read this one for the first time, and thought what a sweet wonderful tale it was , which is nice considering the undercurrent of darkness through many of the others. Two halves making a whole - better than the sum of the parts. Now what could be better?
 
Perpetual's Reviews of GreenKidx's Entries
March 2011=
Greenkidx – Ouch! This one almost hurt, giving into despair seeking only comfort and being rejected from that comfort for doing the one thing she could do to embrace it. Was hard for me to read.

April 2011=

Greendkidx - A rather disturbing one this, but in a great way as I read and began to realise what was going on, I just could not believe it. A superb if somewhat disturbing entry.

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I promise that I am, in fact, (mostly) mentally and emotionally stable!!! HaHaHa ;):D

But seriously thank you for the kind words!
 
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So as some of you may remember (because I've only brought it up two or three times in the interim) that the 75 Word Challenge had its beginnings a little more than a year ago when I related a story ... in the midst of a discussion the subject of which escapes me now ... about a writers groups that I briefly joined, hosted by one of our local bookstores. The woman who was moderating the group, an employee of the bookstore, had the idea that she would set us all little homework assignments between meetings, based on the monthly contests in, I think, Writers' Digest. If I remember correctly, my friend and I were the only people there who actually wrote fiction. Everyone else was writing autobiographical or thinly disguised autobiographical pieces. They had little or no interest in writing anything else. So as it turned out I was the only person who did the exercises every week.

The first exercise was to rewrite a familiar fairy tale and place it in a contemporary setting -- in 75 words or less. When I related these stirring events here at the Chronicles, at some point in the ensuing discussion the idea struck me that it might be fun to try something like that here and see if Chronicles members could do any better than that writing group did. And, oh gosh, did Chronicles folk do better!

The reason I bring this up now is that I have searched and searched for my original story without success, and then today, unexpectedly, when going through some old papers, I found it. I thought about posting it here, but I'm not sure that all the references would make sense outside of the US. But it was nice to run across it again.
 
I thought about posting it here, but I'm not sure that all the references would make sense outside of the US. But it was nice to run across it again.
You folks on the other side of the Pond have to put up with a lot of UK- (and Aussie- and Irish-, etc) specific remarks when you read posts at the Chrons, so it would be churlish of us not to allow you to share something which many North American-based** would enjoy.




** - And as few cultural things are as universal as US films and TV, we non-North Americans may not be as baffled as you might imagine. (No promises, though. :))
 
The reason I bring this up now is that I have searched and searched for my original story without success, and then today, unexpectedly, when going through some old papers, I found it. I thought about posting it here, but I'm not sure that all the references would make sense outside of the US. But it was nice to run across it again.

I may be UK-based, but I am American, so I certainly wouldn't mind some down home cookin'.
 
Hi all - A first time competitor here. Hope my story is OK and the requisite number of words (I checked it several times, so it should be OK.....).

It is based on genuine folklore, btw.
 
T.E. I would be completely bummed if you did not post it here. Please, please, post petitioned Parson.
 
I'm echoing the calls to see the story, also, Teresa. And while I'm here, I can confirm exactly how you came to tell us about the original exercise -- I'd posted a very short story** in Critiques (for my 1,000th post) and the discussion turned to writing a story in, I think, 50 words. You told us about the exercise, and the next thing, everyone was clamouring to have a go!

** at least, we thought it was very short at the time...


Hello, High Eight! Welcome to the Challenge. And with a very good story, too -- I shall have to look up the folk lore, as it sounds intriguing. And now you've done this -- there's the 300 worder to do!
 
Just read High Eight's, no comment yet, I'll wait until I do the next batch, but got the folklore :D
 
I think I get the folklore, or at least, I know of two types of tale that would fit, but I have a feeling there may be something obvious that I'm missing so that I've gone off on the wrong track entirely.


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OK, due to popular demand, I'll post my story from that long-ago "assignment." The Berkeley mentioned is a town in California, but taking what Ursa said into consideration, I'll assume you already know all about that and say no more. I decided that writing the story in the form of a letter would work, since the epistolary style is often terse.

Herewith, my modernization of an old story:

TOAD
(A VERY SHORT FAIRY TALE)​

Dear Mom,

I was in Berkeley and some creep swiped my gold watch. A street-person with purple hair brought it back. He was a real Toad, but I let him crash at my apartment. Later, he came sneaking into my bedroom. Luckily, I know Tai-bo! When he hit the wall, his shades fell off. Underneath, he was a rock star! Tell Dad, Skipper, & Sissy I'm engaged!!!

Your Loving Daughter
(formerly known as Princess.)


 
I love that, Teresa! And as a fan of The O.C. (which really shouldn't be my thing but I loved it when it was on TV), I have heard of Berkeley.
 
Gracious! I'm chucking! I loved it T.E.

(If I had made the assignment, I would have hung the copy on the cork board to let all of my other miscreants know how it was supposed to be done.)
 
Thank you, everyone, for your kind words!

I found another "assignment," which has given me an idea for a thread I might start in the Workshop next month, to give us something to do during the slow period when stories are just trickling in. Nothing exciting, just something to keep us amused during the doldrums.

If I forget, maybe somebody here will remind me.
 
* Hears TJ say something along the lines of: "Letters see more of the epistolary form." *



(I know there's a skipper frog, so I'm assuming the other names relate to amphibians.)
 
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