Re: DISCUSSION the 75 Word Challenge JUNE 2011
Shelley it was, from the only poem I can recite in full.
Apart from the one I just wrote.
Shelley it was, from the only poem I can recite in full.
Apart from the one I just wrote.
Hmmm #1 -- HareBrain and Ozymandias. What connection can we find? A shattered visage? A wrinkled lip? A sneer of cold command? Or just a colossal wreck....?
Hmmm #2 -- Gary writing poetry. HareBrain writing poetry.
Methinks I shall have to reconsider this month's entry...
As I've said, Nourishment is the EASY part.
I can't seem to do the Kipling style at all is the problem. Wells? Possible. Bradbury? Maybe. King? Probably. Poe? I think so.
Kipling? No.
Just no. I tried to experiment earlier today but I found out it had twice the maximum number of words with absolutely no story. I really want to beat Chris over the head with a mallet now.
Er... Shelley, actually...
Just what we need for a 75-word challenge: long rambling sentences. (Or perhaps one long rambling sentence.)...his sentences tend to be long and meandering, and full of little detours, like this....
Do you want us to call the Fire Brigade?Ha ha! The bath/glass of wine combo has done its magic. Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!
In a bit.
*taps foot*
If the Fire brigade don't turn up soon, it's more likely to be a wrinkled toe.A wrinkled lip?
As I've said, Nourishment is the EASY part.
I can't seem to do the Kipling style at all is the problem. Wells? Possible. Bradbury? Maybe. King? Probably. Poe? I think so.
Kipling? No.
Just no. I tried to experiment earlier today but I found out it had twice the maximum number of words with absolutely no story. I really want to beat Chris over the head with a mallet now.
Mouse -- I've found a recording of Kipling reading a bit of one of his poems. http://www.poetryarchive.org/poetry...=B34262F0FFF131E5D1A38AC7837BB6A0?poemId=1691
Still can't tell you the accent, though... (He actually reminds me of Churchill!)
It may be better to read a few entries and perhaps that might generate some ideas as to the style you adopt? I doubt any entries are going to replicate Kipling to the extent that makes it indistinguishable from his own, so I wouldn't worry too much.
Are you suggesting we write about trenchermen, alchemist?
Once more, unto the breach, dear friends!
Oh, wait...that's Shakespeare, not Kipling.... *sigh*