Okay; ref post 200, this is what I've cobbled together. The book is not hard sci fi, I don't expect the reading demographic to want a lot of detail, so I've tried to precis it, but still make it sound like there's a bit of theory behind it. (think 75 word challenge; very useful for this the practice was!)
"What we’re trying to achieve is real time communications across the fleet, to give full strategic support across all the planetary campaigns. It means you still run campaigns locally but they’re monitored by base, meaning you can interlink campaigns strategically. It’ll roll it out across the army comms as well, but I need it in place for the fleet first; the ships carry the comms and link to each other. The hardest bit is getting the configurations right;"
Make sense?