Discussion -- October 2011 Challenge

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Re: Discussion October SEVENTY-FIVE WORD WRITING CHALLENGE

So we're being profiled you say?

Well I have nothing to be concerned about.

Obviously I will come across as a happy go lucky, optimistic, glass half full type. Someone who brings happiness and sunshine into the world, his eyes constantly looking over the horizon: always looking toward a very bright future.


Um....


I'd have to look back a few months to be absolutely certain, but, writing is an extension of the author, and quite often what we repress....which is why I'm worried about myself...
 
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Um....


I'd have to look back a few months to be absolutely certain, but, writing is an extension of the author, and quite often what we repress....which is why I'm worried about myself...
wait so i should go back to being repressed?? i just drug myself out of that hole! *fiendish giggling*
 
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No, not necessarily. Everyone has their own desires no matter how far we've advanced. ;)


And I'd best get off this line of thought before it gets me into trouble. Suffice it to say, we always have our imaginings and curiosities.
 
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Suffice it to say, we always have our imaginings and curiosities.
we do indeed. i'm glad you took my teasing well. no worries, there will always be curiosity enough for me to work with, and the imagination to get me where i want to be in life.
 
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As always, I'm only going to comment on stories I thought I understood. This isn't a reflection on the quality of those I omit.

Perpetual Man I thought this was great. The increasingly frantic tone fits perfectly with the subject matter, and the idea is very interesting. I found myself (superstitiously) considering a copy-paste to an unmarked folder somewhere (so there'd at least be one of you left alone, unread, to try to work free again).

alchemist I laughed out loud both times I read it which shows how successful it was. I think the clipboard is what sells it - great stuff.
 
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Thanks Percival, that might just work...

(and thanks for the comments too, greatly appreciated)
 
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Thanks from me too, Percival. Mission accomplished if somebody laughed! I must get around to reading the other stories, especially as D-day approaches (and then reserve a couple of evenings to read the 300 worders).
 
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Thanks from me too, Percival. Mission accomplished if somebody laughed! I must get around to reading the other stories, especially as D-day approaches (and then reserve a couple of evenings to read the 300 worders).


Well, we have a few weeks besides for the 300, Alchemist....the voting there ends the middle of November.
 
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Good point, Karn. I was only thinking up to the end of October and forgot the fortnight of open voting. It needs almost military planning for me to decide my 300 word voting, while the 75 can be done in one sitting. Having glanced at a few this evening, I see I'll have to concentrate reeeeaaallly hard on some stories.
 
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Hurrah! Didn't think I'd manage it as have been hugely busy with family and other stuff recently. However, I got an idea early on, and have finally found the time to work on it. Hope you like it!

Am off on holiday on Saturday, so it's unlikely I'll get to vote this month. After a quick read through this evening, I have to say that I'm almost relieved as there are some really fabulous entries and having to make a decision is quite daunting.

Mind you, I may get the chance to get online, so you never know. . . ;)
 
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Have fun on holiday, I liked your imagery.
 
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Finally got mine in with about a day and a half to spare! Phew!

Don't ask me what it is about as I'm not sure myself.....
 
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mega-creepy! i liked it. I'm going to have to start going over the stories and get my short list together so I can start narrowing it down.
 
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Ah, fallen to the short list, hmm? ;)

I usually don't do such things myself. Each entry is worth its own merit, but I vote on what stands out to me, and keep the potentials in my own head. :D
 
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High Eight: Nice concept
 
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Perp – Would love to comment on this one, but unfortunately repeated readings mean that I am so deeply entrenched within the computer system I might never get out. Many thanks for all positive comments, really made my day(s).

Quokka – It seems as all of this is a nightmare, and one that can be taken on many different levels and meanings. The whole situation has a nightmarish feel, while the idea of being bound to any form of contract and all the tricks and turns that can come with that are in evidence here, but the last nightmarish connotation is that of the hidden small print, a perfect nightmare in itself. And that does not include whatever that may lead to.

Alchemist – If the dreams of man can be haunting and terrible, what then of the dreams of God? Well it seems that mankind may well turn out to be nothing more than a deities nightmare, and the scary thing is I can understand why. If we are little more than God’s dream then it is bad enough, but that he turns aside from the creation... well actually we would not know about it. But the most nightmarish thing? God playing golf!!!

Stormfeather – This is one of those that could be easily transformed to a longer piece and work well with it. All the same it is a scary tale in its own right. The feel that there is something bubbling beneath the surface, directing and manipulating humanity for its own evil ends – and that we are totally susceptible is chilling to say the least.

High Eight – This is one of those stories that is simple, straightforward and does the job, but offers just enough to allow the reader to grab hold of it and let the imagination billow. I’m sure there are countless interpretations that come from this one simple piece and that is the miracle of these little stories, that so many different things can be drawn from so few words, and here it is done so well.
 
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Have fun on holiday, I liked your imagery.

a) I intend to (this time tomorrow I shall be quaffing something delicious by a pool)!! ;)
b) Thank you! you've made me a very happy Stormy - shall be flying with a smile tomorrow :D

Stormfeather – This is one of those that could be easily transformed to a longer piece and work well with it. All the same it is a scary tale in its own right. The feel that there is something bubbling beneath the surface, directing and manipulating humanity for its own evil ends – and that we are totally susceptible is chilling to say the least.

Once again, I thank you for your lovely words. In the few quiet moments on holiday, I hope to write something for the 300 worder as I actually have an idea for this one. If I manage that, I may just think about the last two entries I've had for this, and see if I can't expand it somehow - and if I do, it'll be down to your inspiration! Cheers :D;)
 
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