Discussion -- 75 Word Challenge -- July

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Can't believe I missed this! I apologise. I forgot when the poll ended and have been very busy with stuff. Was planning on voting tonight - and it's all done!

In time to vote on the Tie-breaker though.

Alchemist - you have my vote!

Would have voted for you anyway. Was planning to. Dammit where does the time go?
 
Many thanks to Bowler1, Abernovo, jonnyjet, Alchemist, Scott, Phyrebrat, Starbeast, nixie, StilLearning, TDZ, Allanon, Moonbat, Aun and Boneman for the mentions / short lists.

I seem to be doing well enough to get mentions / short lists in recent months but not quite well enough to convert these into votes. Note to self: must do better.


Grimbear if only you'd remembered to vote we wouldn't be in a tie-breaker. ;)
 
If it's time for explanations of our stories (except by those in the tiebreaker poll, obviously), I ought to explain mine. To be fair, Wiki will tell you who Urania is, but that doesn't help with the story.


Urania is the Muse of Astronomy. The Muses are the nine daughters of Zeus and Mnemosyne. The reason why Urania's mother would be humiliated by Urania's supposedly poor ability to recall what's happened is that Mnemosyne is the personification of memory.

Urania is on trial for selling her inspiration to humanity, thereby giving them a greater desire to unlock the secrets of the heavens - i.e. the universe - than they would otherwise be allowed. (This is where the title comes in**, a talent being a measure of weight or, in this case, money.)

She is innocent of this, but only because she is guilty of something greater: forcing a love of astronomy onto humanity. She has done this to teach her father a lesson for his sex addiction (which she calls his swanning around) by giving humanity the will to explore, and eventually "conquer", the "heavens", losing the desire to worship the gods of Olympus as they do so.

Whether this is justice or revenge, who can truly know?



** - Actually, the title came first and is a slight rearrangement of the title of Sheridan Morley's biography of Noël Coward, A Talent to Amuse. The phrase just popped into my head on Monday - perhaps someone on the radio said it - and the story seemed to spring straight from that.
 
My second vote went to RCGrant, a tidy little story and something to warm the cockles of my atrophied heart :)

Thank you everyone for the mentions, they are all gratefully appreciated, and thanks for the super entertainment this month!

pH
 
I wanted to go with a futuristic myth of one that sounded like it was being told around lit oil drums of a post apocalyptic land.

The protagonist is inspired by the man with no name archetype except taken to the extreme with no human side being shown both emotionally and physically (hence the mask). The 'and silence followed' was reinforcing the robotic de-humanised path that he trod.

I must admit though that I wasn't happy with the entry. It read quite rushed and since then I've spotted places where it could have been tighter to the idea.

Gratz to alchemist ... a really entertaining read.
 
Springs, I understood the story completely, and loved it for that fact. The version I've been told, however, was of a boat race, but that aside, the tale itself still won out, whatever its origins.

I'm a great admirer of Gaelic and Norse mythology, so for me voting was a no brainer, especially when it had been so well written.

My vote in the Tie Breaker goes to RcG. The story had already made my list, so it'd be unfair to backtrack.
 
I thought I did pretty good. But I guess not everyone saw it as a legendary court case. Agree with TheJudge though, myth and legend are almost completely in the eye of the beholder.

True. Yours was one that was on my shortlist, but when I went back through, I realized I couldn't make that connection to myth/legend, and it dropped off. Sorry :(

Thinking about it when the discussion started, yours was in all likelihood closer to being in the genre than mine was!
 
It's taken me almost 24 hours of going back and forth between Al and Hare to make my decision. Ultimately, as Hare was just shy of making it onto my original mentions (I deleted and added him back once, then deleted again), I felt it was only fair my vote swung that way.
 
Well, I did manage to vote. All right, possibly I didn't take quite as much time over the choice as normal, but I stand by my choice.

Many thanks Talysia for enjoying my versification; I imagine the story itself is straightforward enough that it requires no explanation.
 
Well, this was my fourth entry and the first one to get no Shortlistings or votes! As soon as I saw the subject for the month I knew it would be a struggle.

I did feel like Narcissus was met with Justice. I tried giving the most self involved character in mythology a heart. It was as if he couldn't help but be who he was and in the end as he wasted away watching his reflection he "reflected" on his folly. In a last effort to change he thought of flowers for his beloved. As we know this is how the Narcissus flower came to be.

Maybe Echo would stop by and pick a bouquet and play a little "he loves me, he loves me not" as she cried for her lost love.

I hope so.
 
I have a computer!!!!! I will read them now and hopefully have time to vote!!!
 
Maybe just me, but hasn't this month's challenge taken on it's own mythological proportions? Being more than a straightforward head-to-head, it's starting to feel...sort of...epic!
 
If it's time for explanations of our stories (except by those in the tiebreaker poll, obviously), I ought to explain mine.

:) Mine was inspired by a rather nasty little trojan virus which locked me out of my pc for two days..grrr. Justice I thought? Well it would be nice if the nefarious little gobsh#te who wrote the program had his fingers chopped off so he couldn't write any more viruses - and so Koji 'Samurai' Mitsuhide was conceived.

In my mind he set his virus loose then, feeling elated, started to mess around with his sword. Which inevitably led to his unfortunate accident and the dealing of justice. :D

If I were to write it again, I'd change the line; "After its release, Koji vanished." to "After its release, Koji's activities abruptly ceased." As I think that may have caused some slight confusion.
 
The tiebreaker poll has closed and we have a winner:

Congratulations to RcGrant!





And commiserations to our two worthy runners up, alchemist and HareBrain.
 
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