Discussion -- 300 Word Challenge #6

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Don't we still have a few days left?


Remember, this is also summer, and a lot of peeps like to do their own thing in the summer, whether they're off from school, or take vacation time from work, or what have you.


This was also a rather difficult picture to work with within the genres. For the longest time I was thinking ghost town paranormal but wound up with post-apocalyptic sci fi.
 
K, so I've just written one but it's a tad random and comes in at 307 words. So I'll see what I can chop out.
 
Hi. Must say I'm really impressed with the entries so far for this challenge.

I'm still knocking an idea around but yes, there's been an unfamiliar yellow ball in the sky, luring me outside when I don't have to be inside.

...more tea vicar?
 
Brev – A story that sets itself apart from humanity by showing the point of view from something that is more than human (or less), and how love or lust is seen through inhuman eyes. The construction is handled very well, and it leaves you wrongfooted until just before the end. You really see the main character as some kind of hunter, not realising that it is all a game between two lovers; what you think is a hunter hunting a monster, is something more, and the companion is the victim… really enjoyed it.

PM – Like being slapped in the face by Ken Dodd this story made me smile as the days of my youth came back to life. I really loved the presentation, a form of documentary that tells a story that could almost be considered serious, except when you actually read it, making the absurd real just in the moments you read the words. When you finish you look back and think for a moment what a serious tale it has been until you actually think about the content. It is only then you cannot help but smile.

johnnyjet – This another one of those stories that cleverly squeezes so much into it that it is hard to believe that there are only 300 words. Not only do we have the basic idea of an Earth conquered by aliens who use simulacra of the dear departed to spy upon the living; but there are the throwaway lines that give it so much depth – the description of the alien base, the names of the aliens, the interaction of the two conquered species, the fact we do not see the overlords… excellent.

Flugel Meister – I’m not sure whether I truly got this story, but if my interpretation is right then as far as I am concerned it is a work of genius – but I’m not sure |I should put my interpretation down in case it ruins it for every one else… or then again maybe I’m just being dense and everyone will get it anyway. But a troll wandering in the day, bringing a small level of fear, but more curiosity from the locals, I mean why would something change its habits? The answer is a lot more than just food, but not only is an almost hearth-warming solution, but is a testament to the reduced intellect of trolls too.

Hex – When I started to read this one I did not like it, not because it was bad but because it was so sad. Someone prepared to sell their memories, not only of life but of a true love is heartbreaking, even if the selling is a necessity brought on by encroaching destitution. But… it is the end that turns the whole thing on its head and turns it into a magnificent triumph, a celebration and confirmation of the power of love. There are two in a relationship, and in the strongest, even at the worst of times one can carry the other.

Ratsy – Ahh, a tale of a broken Earth, post apocalyptic perhaps but more by supernatural means than the bomb – or maybe not, who knows how stories might grow about the end of the world when you are looking back from the other side. But in many ways this is irrelevant, what is important here is the heavy weight on the heart and soul of the seeker, as he carries on across the world trying to find the one sign of hope that he and his forefathers have long been seeking. The resolution of that quest looks like a failure, but as he starts to dig you cannot help but feel the hope.

Luiglin – This is a story close to the way I thought about going with mine, so of course I’m going to like it, but other than stepping through the portal the idea goes into a totally different direction. There is much that can be said of yearning of another time and place, another world, and the curiosity that comes with seeing such a place would be enough to overwhelm the least curious of souls. Of course you always have to aware of the negative connotations of stepping into another world. The consequences here are almost certainly terminal in nature, and should stand as a warning to all.

Abernovo – Another tale with a warning, this time about the perils of overconfidence. In a world where something dark has escaped from the depths, has become a threat to all that lives nearby, the obvious answer is to employ a professional who knows how to deal with such things. I think what I enjoyed most about this, is the fact that our protagonist sits there and tells us just how dangerous a demon can be, then opens the door to it unarmed. Perfect.
 
Hey Perp, thanks as always, for the great little review. I don't know how you do it month after month!
 
Thanks for the review as always Perp. Strange how we can both get a similar plot thought from an image that does not necessarily lend itself to the core idea. I had a side inspiration which I'll reveal after voting.
 
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RcGrant_- something that started as a one off during the 75 words a long time ago now and as so many people appreciated it have kept going,carrying it over to the 300 l actually enjoy doing it, only every now and then, it gets a bit hard to keep up!

Luiglin - great minds and all that, but as I said going in totally different directions
 
Perp, thanks for the review. It's always appreciated.

Dear Queenie, can you give Perp a gong for services to aspiring writers?
 
Thanks for the sentiment Abernovo. I think I'd have to fight James Bond to get to the Queen...

I'm going to try and keep going at the comments but...

Apparently not doing enough by falling down the stairs on Friday night and jolting all the joints in my right arm, I decided to be a complete idiot and try and cut the top of my right middle finger tonight.

It's taken me the better part of 30 mins to type this little missive. If I can get my voice recognition software up and running again...
 
It's taken me this long to post... foolishly I read DEO's entry and became somewhat inhibited, by how good it is! :eek: Good one DEO!!:)

I'm off to France for 10 days, where the internet is very poor, so I'll go to a hotel to vote. Good luck everyone!!
 
Mouse, that's excellent! And it took less than an hour to devise. Amazing! And I have to say, the poem to begin the tale really tickled me. On the whole, very impressive indeed. :)

That's good mouse!

:eek: Thank you both very much!

It's just something silly but I looked at the photo and it said 'limerick' to me. Like these things do. :rolleyes:
 
Grimbear – I am trying to come up with something that somehow catches the way I felt as I read this one, and I’m struggling a bit. In the end the word that came to mind was drifting, drifting at the end of the world. There was a lazy feel to the main character that seemed to go hand in hand with the slowness of days where nothing changed only the memories of the past. It could have been a really depressing piece, but somehow it wasn’t, which is what made it work so well. I could almost imagine him sitting there and watching the clouds go by. The ending though, the ending was a breath of fresh air, colour to the black and white. Hope.

Denise Tanaka – A story that kept my mind whirring until the very end trying to work out just what was going on and how it was going to end. The number of possibilities was frightening, but even then I did not anticipate then end. Stories like this really capture the attention. Well constructed, and well written with a real sense of the world created. Really enjoyable, excellent story.

Glen – Another story that is really a simple message but a very true one. IN a world where everything is gone with only echoes of the world that was there before, the initial feeling is that everything has changed. Society has been eradicated and only individuals remain. Yet, those individuals who seem to lead a solitary existence sometimes run into each other, and when they do old patterns emerge, almost as though at the heart of things, those basic things always stay the same. And I think there is very little truer than that.

Grizzgreen711 – What a place to end the story!!! What happens next? Of course it does not matter, that is the point. Rather it is the feeling of fear, that terror of being trapped by the inevitable, while hoping that it just does not happen. I think what makes it all the more palpable is the fact that we know what is the ultimate outcome, all we have here is a voice given to the innocence of seeing horror through innocent eyes. We have a well painted character, who is given life with the threat of it being taken away. IO could just see the family, and felt the tension, hoping that things would end differently. Leaving it open allows us to hope, when we know that probably there was none.
 
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