Kissmequick
loony
*I know it's not her article. You get what I mean.
Wish it was -- it expresses what I was trying to. Only with less bile...
About small breasts moving freely (not a sentence I thought I'd be writing today...), if you're in tight third POV, it's -- well most women just aren't going to narrate that in that way. I notice I have boobs at times (I put on a bit of weight lately -- needed to as well -- and my boobs grew. They started to bounce -- never have before, so I noticed! Or if I'm about to wear something that sans bra may be a little risque I'll think 'need a bra for that one') but as someone upthread said, not many male characters walk around narrating 'I walked away, dressed to the left, scrotum bouncing gently'. It may work in that scene though, if what she is wearing and that she's covered both boobies is part of the point. It's been a while since I read it.
But it's certainly something worth thinking about -- not that characters shouldn't notice things, but whether this character would. (My MC in Fade to Black is, well, he's an unabashed womaniser. He gets abashed later But it was quite odd looking at the world through his eyes, seeing what he would notice rather than what I would, and describing it in his terms.)