Discussion Thread - SEVENTY-FIVE WORD WRITING CHALLENGE May 2013

[Victoria Silverwolf]

Perpetual Man -- A darkly ironic tale of family relationships

Luiglin -- A heartwarming glimpse into emotions

Boneman -- A bittersweet love story

Bowler1 -- A grim picture of future technology

springs -- A surprisingly poetic and hopeful look at apocalypse

Starbeast -- A ghoulishly funny black comedy

fishii -- An emotional account of affection

EloiseA -- An imaginative portrait of cyberpunk relationships

ratsy -- A modern variation on a classic theme

BetaWolf -- An intriguing, open-ended story

 

[Starbeast]

(part two)​

LEGACY​

Betawolf - Tantalizing tale with a nice dash of humor at the tail end. Reads like an enchanting fantasy prologue that has the makings of a bigger story. You left me wanting more. Excellent.​

Victoria Silverwolf - Incredibly cool science fiction tale about an amazing discovery on New Mars! Great atmosphere propels this spectacular idea which would be fun to see on the big screen.

BigJ - Fantastic galactic poetic story about a young man who would change the universe forever! Written with a nice flow of rythmic rhyme of stellar awesomeness! Good stuff.​

 

[Victoria Silverwolf]

BigJ -- An unusual narrative poem on a very large scale

 

[BetaWolf]

Thank you, Victoria and Starbeast.

 

[Starbeast]

Starbeast -- A ghoulishly funny black comedy

Thanks Victoria for the review. You do a great job of saying a lot with a few words.

Thank you, Victoria and Starbeast.

You're welcome BetaWolf. Keep up the good work.

 

[Victoria Silverwolf]

Tywin -- a wry, gently bawdy bit of pleasantry

 

[Tywin]

First time over here in this neck of the forums. 75 words or less... a fun challenge. Almost like writing a Haiku.

 

[Tywin]

Tywin -- a wry, gently bawdy bit of pleasantry

Wow, you're fast. You commented on it before I could even click over and say that I'd posted it .

 

[Jo Zebedee]

First time over here in this neck of the forums. 75 words or less... a fun challenge. Almost like writing a Haiku.

I'm waiting for that to come as a style one month!

Starbeast, Eloise and victoria, ty so much. Starbeast, i might nick some of yours for my avatar!

 

[Starbeast]

First time over here in this neck of the forums. 75 words or less... a fun challenge. Almost like writing a Haiku.

Good afternoon Tywin, nice to meet you. Here's your review.

LEGACY
(part three)​

Tywin - I felt like I was in a pool hall, listening to a guy speak about his misadventures. Colorfully written great joke in story form. Quite a surprise I must say dude. Ferociously funny.

I'm waiting for that to come as a style one month!

Starbeast, Eloise and victoria, ty so much. Starbeast, i might nick some of yours for my avatar!

You're welcome Springs. You want to nick my what?

 

[Jo Zebedee]

First time over here in this neck of the forums. 75 words or less... a fun challenge. Almost like writing a Haiku.

Good afternoon Tywin, nice to meet you. Here's your review.

Tywin - I felt like I was in a pool hall, listening to a guy speak about his misadventures. Colorfully written great joke in story form. Quite a surprise I must say dude. Ferociously funny.



You're welcome Springs. You want to nick my what?

You're safe! I might steal dramatically tremendous... It has to be better than a pot plant!

 

[Starbeast]

You're safe! I might steal dramatically tremendous... It has to be better than a pot plant!

I had to step away for a moment, but now I understand (and see) what you're talking about. Your new avatar is a nice picture too, fits wonderfully.

 

[Luiglin]

Luiglin - You're tugging at my heart with your wonderfully written message from a father to his daughter. With a delightful hint of a couple of movies makes for a nice touch. (sigh) Wonderful.

Luiglin -- A heartwarming glimpse into emotions

Cheers SB and VS ... always appreciated

 

[ratsy]

Thanks for the comments SB, I am glad you wanted to read on!

Thanks as well Victoria.

 

[Perpetual Man]

Thanks for the comments SB and Victoria, I can see I'm going to drop behind again...

 

[Starbeast]

Cheers SB and VS ... always appreciated

You're welcome Luiglin. I'm happy to do it.

Thanks for the comments SB, I am glad you wanted to read on!

Thanks as well Victoria.

You're welcome Ratsy. Good stuff.

Thanks for the comments SB and Victoria, I can see I'm going to drop behind again...

You're welcome Perpetual Man. Take your time, the month is still very young.

 

[Bowler1]

Bowler1 -- A grim picture of future technology

Robots have a hard time with me, it's not all RAY GUN fun! Thank you VS.

Starbeast, what can I say - "Mechanical marauders", great word use. I liked that.

 

[Karn Maeshalanadae]

No worries, friends, I haven't died yet.


I'll see about getting something out. Hot weather's been hitting us for a while, among other things, so, I haven't had much desire to use my brain beyond necessities.


I'll be looking through them all as well.

 

[TheDustyZebra]

Karn! I think that's a new record for you!

 

[Starbeast]

Robots have a hard time with me, it's not all RAY GUN fun! Thank you VS.

Starbeast, what can I say - "Mechanical marauders", great word use. I liked that.

I'm happy to here that Bowler1. I like it when robots fight.

No worries, friends, I haven't died yet.

I'll see about getting something out. Hot weather's been hitting us for a while, among other things, so, I haven't had much desire to use my brain beyond necessities.

I'll be looking through them all as well.

Yikes, I was unaware it's blazing hot where you are. Keep cool pal.

LEGACY
(part four)​

Karn Maeshalanadae - You've written a fierce tale which reads like a strong warning to the current rulers of the world. The fictional shocking horror of war and toxic contamination that you wrote about is slowly happening in reality (it seems), which makes your story very frightening! Nice work, good, and terrifing.​