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Juliana - One of those annoyingly clever pieces that seems to effortless convey a larger story, while using so few words. When looking back it would be easy to believe that I had read something a lot longer. The opening sentence was beautifully visual, and the betrayal at the end was perfectly delivered, a nice little verbal knife in the back.
SB - Sometimes there are stories that leave me speechless - and laughing at the same time and SB is a master of this trick. No matter what the subject matter he ios always able to make me chuckle. In this instance I worry about m,y own interpretation of his tale, because once I worked out what I thought the horse bit meant, there was no going back. Naughty |Starbeast! Naughty! (Or perhaps naughty Perp...) As always pure entertainment.
Springs - A story that has something to say about some modern fiction perhaps, where something that might be considered just the way things were is still something else, and maybe that should not be forgotten. but at the same time manages to tell a tale that is both exciting and... and well, almost as bad as SB’s to be honest. (At least a proper lesson was taught...)
Bowler1 - Taken a s a disconnected story in it’s own right this is an excellent piece, that is both chilling and dark, something that needs to find it’s place in the world and does so, settling and a chilling predatory existence. But when looked at in the wider light, it drags Tolkien into a darker place, while fitting perfectly with what is there already.
Hope - A little story of things trying to survive against the cold, believing that the winter cannot last forever. There is some beautiful (well, in the writing sense) imagery of the creatures huddled beneath the bodies of their victims, and the hope that the cold will end, and with its passing will come freedom.
Mirannan - I liked the way that this drew on classic sources, and although I knew how it was going to end before I got there it did not detract from the chilly twist. A deal with demons should be a tricky thing, and this was the perfect deal in that sense. I loved the title too, perfect!