Thanks everyone!
As VB said, my first success in the 300 word challenge.
I'm stunned with the win, mainly because of the typo right in the middle of the story. I noticed the thing 20 minutes after the editing window had shut and thought that it would cost me so many votes that I wouldn't stand a chance. I'd be interested to know if people just didn't see it, saw it and ignored it or saw it and discounted the story altogether.
Anyway, thanks to CC, Victoria, J D Foster, VB, Johnny Jet. A. Fare Wells, HazelRah, Little Star, Phyrebrat and Alc for the mentions / short lists.
And many, many thanks to Cul, U.M., ratsy, T.J., TDZ, Starbeast, Droflet, Bowler, StilLearning, Luiglin, Mr Orange, DG, and Travis Woodward for the votes.
And whilst composing this post I've realised that I didn't thank people who appreciated my story in the October 75 word challenge. I intend to put that right in the next few minutes!