Congratulations harebrain!
And thank you especially Tim and johnnyjet for the votes, and the others who mentioned my story.
I know sometimes a 75 worder can be quite confusing, so I will do my best to explain some of the thoughts behind mine for those who didn't quite get where I was coming from.
Firstly, Klaus was just a name - I felt that Christmas and steampunk both fit quite nicely into a Germany-Victorian type era. If you saw him as a version of St Nick or Santa, then that could be entirely possible as an alternative origin story, but it's not what I intended.
Overall it was supposed to read with the double meaning - a tired, loving father watching his newborn sleep vs. the child has died in the night and the thoughts and hopes of the father are instead based in grief and regret.
Boxing Day being a day for funerals what supposed to indicate not only that the child had died, but klaus's desire to avoid facing the reality of his daughter's death for just one more day. Christmas is usually seen as (and expected to be) a joyful time, and I wanted the sourness and real feeling of what it's like for those who do not have a joyful day, and how they might best deal with it.
I liked the idea of a coal mobile above the cot - I think in a steam-based world a small steam powered mobile would fit right in. They would power it up when they put the child to bed and it would slowly have burnt out by the time they were asleep. Maybe a little bit dangerous to have hot coals above a baby, but i'm sure in this world they've taken safety precautions of some kind...
Also, the coal dust settling on the infant's face was supposed to be another indication of the child's death, as i'm sure normally you would wipe away soot falling onto your sleeping child - but klaus was doing his best to hold onto his denial so didn't want to disturb the child and make it impossible for him to keep pretending that it hadn't happened.
I suppose it was written quite subtly... What I see in my brain doesn't always translate into 75 words of clarity
Sorry for the morbidity aswell
I originally sat down to write something Christmassy...
Anyway, I hope everyone had a great Christmas/Hanukkah/holiday, and hope you all have a good New Year's too!