I don't think I like Garner's
Elidor a lot. Certainly it keeps your interest -- the weird "electrical" disturbances of the Elidorian Treasures when they are hidden in our world, for example. But maybe in this one Garner's desire to pare things down -- arguably too much -- is at work, so that, for example, either the four children simply are not sufficiently differentiated, or their differences must be worked out by the reader peering closely for subtle clues. I can accept the idea that, despite the title, the novel is not primarily about a strange land called Elidor but about the effects on some people of our world who have contact with it -- but still the presentation of Elidor seems almost perfunctory, almost disdainful, as if the author can't really be bothered to work up much atmosphere of the place, its people, etc.
I wonder if Garner wasn't reacting against his own first novel and its popularity, perhaps being so determined NOT to repeat himself that the book suffers. I wonder further if Garner was reacting against the Narnian books, about which he has said nasty things.
Elidor has four children as characters, as the first Narnian books do, and here again it's the youngest (Roland) who believes in the other world most passionately, and whose truthfulness is questioned (cp. Lucy). But where Lucy is vindicated, the implication is that Roland, who was also truthful in insisting on the other world, is headed for a catastrophic breakdown -- which (in a 1973 interview with Justin Wintle) Garner said is what happens. The glorious unicorn Findhorn seems to be a sort of Aslan, who is killed (for reasons not clear to me) by warriors of Elidor. The unicorn's "song" evidently restores Elidor, but Findhorn seems dead. Garner said the novel was the most "nihilistic" thing he'd written. It seems to have been a personal book and perhaps some of the personal issues encoded in it were not as well resolved in the making of a work of art, independent of the author, as they needed to be.
I imagine I'll read it yet again -- and that might be a sixth reading, but I will rate it at the bottom of Garner's four novels four children. (
Red Shift, the fifth novel, was published, here in the States at least, as a children's book -- which is ridiculous.)
Next I'm reading my first book by one of the members. Monsters, Maces and Magic: Outpost by @TWErvin2. I read The Sleeping Dragon when it came out in the 80s, which seems to have started this genre. I remember that I enjoyed it at the time. Thanks for giving Outpost a try, Anthoney. I hope...
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So my ranking of the four children's/YA books:
1.Weirdstone, by far my favorite
2.Owl Service
3.Moon of Gomrath
4.Elidor