DISCUSSION THREAD -- May 2020 -- 75-Word Writing Challenge

Congratulations @Hugh

Thank you for the :ninja: votes @HoopyFrood and @Mr Orange

Thanks for the mentions everyone else

And here's the theme tune for my effort


My understanding of Weird Fiction came from here
"The true weird tale has something more than secret murder, bloody bones, or a sheeted form clanking chains according to rule. A certain atmosphere of breathless and unexplainable dread of outer, unknown forces must be present; and there must be a hint, expressed with a seriousness and portentousness becoming its subject, of that most terrible conception of the human brain—a malign and particular suspension or defeat of those fixed laws of Nature which are our only safeguard against the assaults of chaos and the daemons of unplumbed space." - H. P. Lovecraft

and here
"Suppose you were told there was a tiger in the next room: you would know that you were in danger and would probably feel fear. But if you were told "There is a ghost in the next room," and believed it, you would feel, indeed, what is often called fear, but of a different kind. It would not be based on the knowledge of danger, for no one is primarily afraid of what a ghost may do to him, but of the mere fact that it is a ghost. It is "uncanny" rather than dangerous, and the special kind of fear it excites may be called Dread." - C. S. Lewis

So I interpreted it as "the monster under the bed", "the monster in the closet", the creaking floorboard outside the bedroom etc. In other words, the horror unseen. So, I wanted to create a sense of terror getting closer and closer, until I ruined it all with a bad pun :giggle:

Thanks for reading
 
I had mistakenly thought the vote finalized at the end of the month so I didn't get it in. For what it's worth, here are mine.

Short List :

@dannymcg - a hidden gem about being caught in the act
@Guttersnipe - a step into weirdness that's easy to step into
@Kharn - A haunting scene of 'Poe-esque' proportions.
@Avelino de Castro - clever, humorous and oh so believable!
@Hugh - smooth and novel prose that was delightful to read.

My Vote went to : @BT Jones who proves that art is not fiction as the literary owls - literally - come to life. It almost didn't get my vote (I must be slow) however because it took me a few times to figure out who the 'particular' mouse was. Once I did, it was over for me!!

Congrats to @Hugh!
 
Congratulations Hugh!

Thank you, everyone, for reading my story. I learned about a new genre while doing this. I have it my best shot, even though it was a little weird.
 
Congratulations @Hugh - and to @Starbeast for an almost-tie finish.

Thanks to Ursa, TDZ, johnnyjet &StilLearning for the votes. I was getting worried that I might blank out on my favourite genre.

Thanks also to the shortlisting, and a big raz-fart to Div @Mouse who tricked me into entering and then didn't enter sheself! Bad bad bad. I'll get you...

pH
 
After a calming garden based peruse in the dappled shade of a tree, I would have gone for @Starbeast. It wouldn't have made a difference to the final vote apart from ramping up the tension.
 
@HoopyFrood – Immaculate. Absolutely brilliant. I love the beautiful simplicity of it. Nails the brief, brings a smile. It’s the first time I’ve ever read an entry and said ‘winner’ to myself!

Blimey. I might frame this, I think it's the nicest thing anyone's ever said.

Many thanks for the votes and mentions.
 
I had mistakenly thought the vote finalized at the end of the month so I didn't get it in. For what it's worth, here are mine.

Short List :

@dannymcg - a hidden gem about being caught in the act
@Guttersnipe - a step into weirdness that's easy to step into
@Kharn - A haunting scene of 'Poe-esque' proportions.
@Avelino de Castro - clever, humorous and oh so believable!
@Hugh - smooth and novel prose that was delightful to read.

My Vote went to : @BT Jones who proves that art is not fiction as the literary owls - literally - come to life. It almost didn't get my vote (I must be slow) however because it took me a few times to figure out who the 'particular' mouse was. Once I did, it was over for me!!

Congrats to @Hugh!

Thanks very much @Bren G. I am pleasantly surprised by the vote as I hadn't expected such a quickfire piece of whimsy to appeal to many people in light of some of the more serious pieces. It was really just an exercise in trying a different style for me, so I'm pleased that it was not without merit.
 
Congrats, @Hugh! Great story -- there were a few, but I couldn't go past your proper weird offering when it came to voting.

Many thanks to @Parson and @Stable for the votes, and thanks also to those who mentioned or listed my story. In truth I feared I hadn't come even close to hitting the genre, and I felt a bit of a fraud, but I'm pleased that my story still struck a note for some!
 
After a calming garden based peruse in the dappled shade of a tree, I would have gone for @Starbeast. It wouldn't have made a difference to the final vote apart from ramping up the tension.

I still enjoy hearing a mention (many thanks folks). And a "vote" mention is awesome. Immense gratitude for that. Luiglin.

I was hoping for a tied game, that way Hugh and I would have to have a Light Sabre Duel.

Congratulations Hugh, well played Starbeast.

Thanks bro. I'm cool being in Second Place. I was glad to see you, many familiars and new members too. Excellent poem. Or do you prefer, rhyme?



Also congrats @Victoria Silverwolf & @Phyrebrat for a 3rd Place tie.
 

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