DISCUSSION THREAD JULY 2020 75-WORD WRITING CHALLENGE

Thanks BTJ and Hugh for the mentions, and a VOTE - thanks Starbeast!

Lots of great entries (again() this month. Elevet is a close second to AMB who gets my vote.
 
Well, here's my longer than usual shortlist
The Debacle at Delphi - @Bren G
Science, Magic, Discover - The Full Monty - @Perpetual Man
On A Lazy Sunday Afternoon - @Elckerlyc
What’s in a word - @Luiglin
Lady in red - @dannymcg
OUT OF THEIR ELEMENTS - @Ashleyne
Blown Away - @mosaix
Table 22. Prevalence of life forms by primary chemical elements they are based on - @holland
Life Through A Microscope - @paranoid marvin
Sherlock Holmes and The Adventure of the Four Elements - @The Judge

But my vote goes to
I… Um… Think It’s Heading for Atomic War…. - @Ursa major
probably because I enjoyed decoding it. Without looking up anything, I counted 14.
 
Many, many thanks for the vote, M. Robert. :):)

As to how many of "them" there are.... I'll give the number after the polling closes.
 
Well, here's my longer than usual shortlist
The Debacle at Delphi - @Bren G
Science, Magic, Discover - The Full Monty - @Perpetual Man
On A Lazy Sunday Afternoon - @Elckerlyc
What’s in a word - @Luiglin
Lady in red - @dannymcg
OUT OF THEIR ELEMENTS - @Ashleyne
Blown Away - @mosaix
Table 22. Prevalence of life forms by primary chemical elements they are based on - @holland
Life Through A Microscope - @paranoid marvin
Sherlock Holmes and The Adventure of the Four Elements - @The Judge

But my vote goes to
I… Um… Think It’s Heading for Atomic War…. - @Ursa major
probably because I enjoyed decoding it. Without looking up anything, I counted 14.
Thanks for the mention @M. Robert Gibson !
 
Interesting challenge and very diverse stories, more humor and puns than normal as well @The Judge I'm looking at you! I think that made picking a winner and even picking a snort (blame typos!) short list very difficult. But here it is.

A Death on Venus: A Solve-It-Yourself Mystery by @Victoria Silverwolf because its a good story and I want to know the answer.

Earth, Wind, Fire, Water by @johnnyjet because it's a model of efficiency.

Subterfuge by @CarBear because it makes me chuckle.

Table 22. Prevalence of life forms by primary chemical elements they are based on by @holland because of it's very unique idea.

Life Through A Microscope by @paranoid marvin because it answered a key element of life.

The Trouble with Twibbles by @elvet because I like logical but unintended consequences.

In the end I went with @holland's (I hope it's not prophetic!) unusual stye story.
 
These days, when I do not have the time to fully cogitate and examine the stories I just go with a gut decision, it normally works out well, because it is rare that on an initial read more than one story has the necessary reaction.

However, this month there were four or five. Perhaps it is the prevalence of humour.

It made me have to really think.

After a lot of vacillation I went with Holland's piece. In set up it was not a traditional story, yet it told a story that was full of depth, emotive and possibly prophetic. (Hopefully not)
 
For me, I like to read a story that doesn't need the research department of the British Library to help me understand what's going on.

So if I find myself reading a "75" word story that I know, else why would the writer write it, must have some deep inner thinking hidden therewithin. But that I just don't get. I just give it a pass.

Now @Perp Perv, was lucky. I already knew about the film "The Full Monty" and it's relationship to Anne of Cleaves so his story was OK.

Without that insight, his story would have been passed over.

Sorry folks, but that's the way I roll.
 
Busy, busy, so just lists and a vote.

Honorables: Margaret Note Spelling, Perpetual Man, Provincial, MikeAnderson, AMB, Mad Alice, David Evil Lord

Nearly Was A Finalist:
Land Under Wave, CarBear, Holland

Finalists:
Ahsleyne: Hilarious and unique; I could see this as a real show, in a somewhat different world than ours.
The Judge: Impeccable storytelling (so much story in so few words), and a great last line.

By a hair, my vote goes to TJ. Well done! :)

Again, a huge thanks to sule for the vote. Good luck with voting, all, the rest of the way, CC
 
My vote went to @Daysman's A Human Puzzle - weird and captivating, was pretty sure it would probably get my vote from the moment I first read it, well done! (y)


Finalists:
@Victoria Silverwolf: Death on Venus: A Solve-It-Yourself Mystery - Great story, hopefully the cops figured it out, but I doubt it :ROFLMAO:
@Ashleyne: OUT OF THEIR ELEMENTS - Not even that crazy, having in mind all the crap that's on TV nowadays. :confused:


Thanks to everyone who mentioned/shortlisted my story, and particularly to those who voted for it!
 
Top 3 from me...
  • @dannymcg - It rubs the lotion on its skin or else it gets the hose again.
  • @Stable - Come up to me with your "What did you say?" And I'll tell you straight in the eye...
  • @MikeAnderson - Today will not be known as Taco Tuesday; it will be known as Freedom Friday! ...But still on a Tuesday!
And the vote went to @dannymcg :)
 
A lot of great stuff this month--I had to pare down my list three times! And here I am, indecisive to the end and voting last minute....


My Absolute, Final Short List (Draft 4) --


Age's End - by @Justin Swanton

Apocalyptic! No matter how many brick walls we slam into, as long as someone keeps faith, society will get up and walk on again. This brief window of a story left me wanting to fling it wide open and climb through to find out more!


Out of their Elements - by @Ashleyne

The 'reality' show the world most needs--I hope it has a good long run!


Experimental Teaching - by @Sblackwood

When I think of all the other elements he could have shot instead.... *sighs with relief and shudders*


Blown Away - by @mosaix

I wish I had a cat like that....


Elements of Elegance - by @chrispenycate

"....from chipped flint to fusion missiles"--for when polite conversation inevitably goes sour!


And Isn't It Draconic? - by @David Evil Overlord

If nature documentaries existed in Terry Pratchett's Discworld, this is what they'd be like. I can absolutely see it being filmed (with Lady Sybil as dragon expert, of course), and I love it!



My Vote --



Out of their Elements! Thanks, @Ashleyne , for your inspiring entry! It's a brilliant idea, and funny, and it so makes me want to film it myself. :giggle:
 
Busy, busy, so just lists and a vote.

Honorables: Margaret Note Spelling, Perpetual Man, Provincial, MikeAnderson, AMB, Mad Alice, David Evil Lord

Nearly Was A Finalist:
Land Under Wave, CarBear, Holland

Finalists:
Ahsleyne: Hilarious and unique; I could see this as a real show, in a somewhat different world than ours.
The Judge: Impeccable storytelling (so much story in so few words), and a great last line.

By a hair, my vote goes to TJ. Well done! :)

Again, a huge thanks to sule for the vote. Good luck with voting, all, the rest of the way, CC

Well that's the closest I've come to a vote so far! Thank you for the mention. :)
 
After several mentions and being put on short lists I'm pleased to see I've finally broken my duck for this month's challenge.

And not one but two wonderful votes!

Many thanks to @AMB and to @Luiglin
 
Elements of whimsy blew in on the west wind this month, a periodic table of mischievous puns, misheard wishes and unintended outcomes, and one or two puzzlements to add to the mix.

Here's my favourite five and vote:
@Land Under Wave
@Perpetual Man
@Elckerlyc
@mosaix
@The Judge

As for my bit, instead of the usual 75 worder, my socially distanced muse dropped a multi-monolithic sculpture on the lawn and legged it before I could reach the door…

So, thanks to @holland and @Astro Pen for your votes — quite unexpected, much appreciated!

And thanks to @Trollheart, @Parson and @Victoria Silverwolf for your reviews.

Now, I need to go visit a nearby thread to stare at the sun between two trees… again...
 
As ever some stories I didn't understand, though I did get Victoria's doomed city and I managed 14+2 for Ursa!

Anyway, my short list:

Ashleyne -- Out Of Their Elements
Cat's Cradle -- Holy Mass
Elckerlyc -- On A Lazy Sunday Afternoon
holland -- Table 22...
Joshua Jones -- The Fault In Our Star
M Robert Gibson -- PArTY - ON
TheEndIsNigh -- An Introduction


It wasn't easy to choose a winner from those stories, which were all so very different, but in the end I went with Ashleyne's elemental reality show, which I'm sure will be taken up by someone somewhere, with CC's scathing view of the element of power coming a close second..

Goodness. This is the best I've done in a long while -- as ever, I can rely on Holmes! So great earth, fire and water thanks for the lovely mentions/shortlistings BTJones, Hugh, elvet, johnnyjet, MRG, Starbeast and Daysman, and giant balloon airy element thanks for the wonderful votes nixie, Chris P, Vince and CC! Oh, and a stealth vote from Joshua! Thank you!!
 
I recorded little comments while reading your stories, so I'm gonna share them all in one long post.

Victoria Silverwolf presents us with a mystery. Only by completing this puzzle will we avert mass destruction.

Margaret Note Spelling shows us a world filled with magic. The price for living a a world with a brand new magical element is to hand our power over to the fairies.

Bren G plays with words to bring about a humorous ending for this mythological inspired fantasy.

Perpetual Man creates an element. Shame it’s not the one his protagonist hoped for.

Land Under Wave brought on a bout of nostalgia. One of the warmest things to recollect is me making a Mother’s Day card, stating that I loved her more than anyone else. Giving a personal gift to a loved one is made all the better when you see there face light up. This author brings an extra element of fantasy to such memories.

Guttersnipe sets the scene, exhibiting the potential for what could be an enticing kids’ series.

Sorry, Cat’s Cradle, but I don’t feel like joining your cult. The idea of nuclear energy being recognised as a holy element seems preposterous. What lives must the cult members have led to make them believe such propaganda? I will give you a vote, though, but only if you promise not to nuke me.

Provincial brings us a story of extinction, one which may be just around the corner. Prolonged deterioration of the elements creates a world fit only as a deathbed for roses.

Elckerlyc uses anthropomorphism to make natural weather anomalies and disasters seem cute.

Luiglin’s mysterious prose kept me guessing. I love puns and wordplay. Suffice to say, I wasn’t disappointed.

dannymcg creates a city under siege, a red herring for the cleverly funny ending.

Daysman uses evocative imagery to create a tale perfect for those who love puzzles.

Justin Swanson creates a heart palpitating, nightmare reality where technology, itself, has become extinct. Some would welcome the chance to live off the elements, but I need my laptop more than oxygen. I’m not even exaggerating.

TheEndIsNigh introduces us to the element of life through characterisation. It made me imagine the millions of carbon cells in my body talking to me at once, like some sort of hive mind.

Starbeast created a fantasy story before slapping me in the face with the element of surprise.

BT Jones reminds us to pay attention in our studies, or endure the possibility of everlasting failure.

Hugh, through fantastical elements, creates a strong lesson. We should measure our love not by its outer effects, but the way it brightens us on the inside.

Hugh shows us that saving money is as easy as gaining knowledge and experience.

fostersaccount’s artist ads a nefarious element to his art. Any publicity is good publicity, right?

MikeAnderson goes overboard while delivering a lesson to a dismissive teacher.

Marvin sends us on an exhilarating journey over a disintegrating world. I can almost feel the flame’s breath under my wings.

Johnnyjet keeps it simple, turning the weather into emotional gestures.

Sblackwood’s imaginative Sci-Fi sports game encourages its contestant to experience the elements in unorthodox ways. I’d assume scoring Pu would have deadly consequences.

Another element of surprise from, this time from CarBear. Disappointment and embarrassment sets in during the revelation of a cruel prank.

A parent gives a flicker of hope to their children in Joshua Jones’ sad tale.

Mosiax uses comedy to invoke the element of wind and fight the mischievous invaders.

Trollheart implements miscommunication and word play to create a comic Sci-Fi.

Using well-loved fantasy elements, Parson carves a story relatable to anyone who’s other suffered from the dreaded writer’s block.

scarpelious shows the difficulty of living with a speech impediment. Although comic, you’ve gotta admire someone who can rise to a position of authority in spite of adversities.

holland offers a snapshot into the future, where carbon life has been replaced.

Chrispenycate introduces us to an intriguing academy that specialises in combat. If only I could have gone to such an academy.

Ambrose creates a charming, mathematical satire.

Astro Pen depicts the beauty that surrounds us in the natural elements. We have a lot of things in our caves to keep us entertained, but sometimes, the most freeing feeling is to be one with nature in the great outdoors.

If M.Robert Gibson was my science teacher, I’d have no problem remembering the periodic table with witty stories such as this.

paranoid marvin demonstrates how a single, scientific breakthrough can illuminate the world in ways unfathomable.

If we as a species ever manage to control the weather, it can be used for great destruction and domination, as highlighted by Vince W’s story.

AstroZon takes us to the stars to mine asteroids. What may seem like a generic career in the future looks thrilling compared to today’s standards.

Elvet brings us a sinister, yet adorable story of a cat who may have unwittingly killed their owners.

The Judge creates another chapter for Sherlock Holmes. Watch him figure out these catastrophic events, and track down the familiar foe responsible.

Beelzebub utilises the minds of scientist to bring about a malicious plan in Maya13's thought provoking tale.

AMB takes us to a world where human extinction clears the way for the restructuring of an empire.

Mad Alice made me giggle with the ginormous proportion of this absurd, imagination fuelled story. Maybe we're as small to some as ants are to us.

Ursa Major delivers two of my favourite things: Greek mythology and puns.

David Evil Overlord stimulated my imagination with images of this strange, yet funny supernature documentary.



 

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