Discussion Thread -- JANUARY 2021 -- 300 Word Writing Challenge #40!

Well, I thought I had a chance this month, until I read what everyone else had produced. Some cracking work here.
Honorable mentions below, short list in bold, votes emboldened & underlined.
  • @Jo Zebedee – I loved your spiky take on the challenge.
  • @farntfar – Deliciously bizarre.
  • @paranoid marvin – Ever the master poet.
  • @Luiglin – Cracking fun. One part Indiana Jones, one part Conan.
  • @Rafellin – A love the scene-setting.
  • @Victoria Silverwolf – Oh my, Victoria, what a gloriously potent potion you've concocted.
  • @Cat's Cradle – Brilliant, and possibly one of the best closing lines I can remember reading.
  • @The Scribbling Man – A nice detective story.
  • @sule – Splendid. Great idea. I grew up on these things, and I love the added futility of it all.
  • @Vaz – An ode to the masks we all wear; and I just adore ‘a hot queasy worm of unknowing’. Inspired.
  • @johnnyjet – Crisp, dynamic dialogue, and some real heart.
  • @Phyrebrat – Tragically twisted.
  • @Peter V – A wonderful story.
  • @Bren G – Beautiful.
  • @Mouse – Utterly mesmeric.
  • @therapist – Truly dark.
I could easily have shortlisted another 10 or so. Great work everyone.
 
Hey , thanks for the shortlisting J S Wigg, and thanks also for the kind comments B T Jones. Hey therapist, I'm pleased I found a poem that resonated with you, and thanks so much for underlining it with a vote.
 
@Marvin .... Odontophobia .... There is no such thing as too much information regarding a dentist.
 
The ones I enjoyed for various reasons

Pirates of the Kahr-ubd-eon System - @JS Wiig
Coffee Please - @Wayne Mack
When all else fails - @Luiglin
Valse Triste - @Victoria Silverwolf
Mass Coverage. - @mosaix
Attack of the Centrippids, Episode #83 (Choose Your Own Adventure) - @sule
Beyond the Smoking Mirror - @Peter V
You, doctor - @Topher
Another Toy Story - @Perpetual Man
Odontophobia - @Marvin

The ones that got the votes
Forbidden Knowledge - @Edoc'sil
A Fright At The Museum - @paranoid marvin
To Everything a Season - @Phyrebrat
 
Thanks for the shortlisting Wayne Mack, and yippee another vote , thanks M.Robert Gibson.

Perpetual Man, M.Robert Gibson and chrispenycate all made my shortlist, all great entries.

Johnnyjet, I really liked your story, and if I only had one vote your sentimental tale would get it.

Thankfully I have three, so I can also vote for Jo Zebedee and Edoc'sil whose entries I also enjoyed immensely.
 
Shortlist:
Forbidden Knowledge by Edoc'sil
SOULLESS by Jo Zebedee
A Fright At The Museum by paranoid marvin
Valse Triste by Victoria Silverwolf
Reflections in Obsidian by BT Jones

Votes:
The Dying Breaths by Cat's Cradle
Mosaic by The Scribbling Man
To Everything a Season by Phyrebrat
 
Topher: The author effectively captures the wonder, terror, and joy that can fill the heart and mind of a young child. By suddenly shifting the reader's perspective at the end, the reader comes to share those responses.

M. Robert Gibson: This two-fisted, red-blooded tale of adventure pays tribute to classic pulp fiction of yesteryear. The main character's clever ruse proves that one need not be merely a mighty-thewed barbarian to conquer evil.

therapist: Through the use of a fantasy premise the author provides an allegory of suffering and compassion. The open-ended conclusion forces us to ask ourselves how we would respond in such a situation.

chrispenycate: This introspective account of the all-too-common experience of debility takes an uncompromising look at the reality of the body's frailty. The theme of reflection, in more than one sense of the word, invites readers to consider their own susceptibility to physical limitations.

Ian Fortytwo: In this grim story of seemingly insurmountable odds against survival, suspense blends with a sense of the ephemeral nature of life. The narrator's final reaction to his fate conveys the astonishment we sometimes feel at our own existence.

Perpetual Man: The author playfully considers the fact that a pedant's expertise is often outdone by an outsider's unprejudiced eye. Besides raising a smile, this fable gently leads the reader to a state of becoming modesty.

The Judge: With tongue firmly in cheek, the author creates a combination of ancient myth and modern fantasy which is sure to amuse. As an added bonus, this droll tale perfectly captures the mixture of naiveite and hidden wisdom often found in the very young.

Ursa major: By bringing divinity down to Earth, this wry story allows us to imagine the trial and tribulations of a less-than-omnipotent deity. The conclusion raises the intriguing question of what exactly the limitations of such a being might be.

Marvin: The author conveys the full intensity of a nearly universal source of fear in this dark comedy. By only slightly exaggerating what we imagine happens in such a situation, this story comes to seem all too real.


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Votes go to

Jo Zebedee

Cat's Cradle

Daysman
 
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