DISCUSSION THREAD -- July 2021 -- 300 Word Writing Challenge #42

PM, Ursa and Daysman make my day and and get my vote.
Many, many thanks for the vote, pm... :):)


...particularly as it gives me an early opportunity to mention that I wrote my entry on Sunday 1st August, the only benefit (from my perspective) of being on BST (British Summer Time) while the Challenge runs on GMT (Greenwich Mean Time)....
 
A lot of solid entries. But these ones especially caught my interest.

My shortlist
@farntfar and @BT Jones — both had great endings that made me go back and reread the story.
@PigMonkey nice writing that swept me into the tale
@Cat's Cradle a cool story about time and a tough sacrifice
@M. Robert Gibson super duper fun that made me want to read more

Me votes
@sule nice story about a misunderstood magic
@The Judge lovely ending that perfectly wrapped it up
@Perpetual Man great story, my favorite entry.
 
It was a great image for this month, so well done TDZ on that count. My top ten for this round are:

@Astropen - an assertion that though we can live an imaginary life, and a rich one, ultimately, as with Mowgli in the Jungle Book, we are called to act in Real Life to make that life truly meaningful. And the appearance of the woman shows that no man is an island.
@Victoria Silverwolf - a whimsical nod to larger-than-life characters from fact and fiction - Phileas Fogg, Willy Wonka and PT Barnum (and maybe even a dash of Abraham Lincoln?) - that speaks of the call of the young to remake the world with dreams and magic.
@AltLifeAStory - apt that this twisting creation once starts again with a word; through our utterances we can shape the world. The Father is the maker, the engineer, the creator; and the Daughter, imbuing it with life and love and danger. And so the world is both balanced and always on the edge of chaos: beautiful but laced with danger; dangerous but filled with love.
@Cat's Cradle - a perfectly structured and well written tale of love and duty, and how cruelly the two are interwoven. Did Tommy return to truly change time, or just to say goodbye to his mother? I think I know the answer.
@Lawrence Twiddy - Very strong overtures of Black Mirror's White Bear episode in this strange tale of cruel punishments that blur the lines between reality and nightmare.
@Peter V - I am a sucker for a tragic tale that just carries a smidgen of hope. After all, what else is life? It brings to mind that great scene from The Brothers Karamazov, where Father Zosima leaves the door to salvation open for the wayward Dmitri. Even stuck in a portal world beyond the reach of man, perhaps love - and action - can find a way to bridge that unfathomable gap.
@Phyrebrat - a typically rich tale of loss laced with wonderful metaphors and the slow march of grief, but once again laced with a thread of hope. The Goose Moon, a symbol of return, shines over the piece, and everywhere the full flux of life is shown. And there, the voices of the dead, who watch and grieve with greater intensity than those whose hearts still beat, yet do so in the knowledge that death is not the end.
@M. Robert Gibson - With heroes like these, who needs villains?
@The Judge - the ring is the perfect metaphorical symbol to lie at the centre of this tale of tales within tales. The heart of the labyrinth, naturally, contains the place of greatest suffering, but in facing this suffering, maybe one day Alberic can escape his grief.
@therapist - I gave a wry smile halfway through this tale of cosmic matryoshka as I realised what was happening. Similarly to Astropen's tale up top, we're presented with an SF take on the infinite possibilities of thinking our way through multiple realities, and the consequences of them. At the end, though, the dreams must end, and we must act. But can we trust ourselves to act in the right way when the time comes? This tale may not offer any answers to that question, but reminds us to be mindful of everything we do.

Hoo-boy. Some really fine entries there, and I found it funny how many stories were thematically similar (at least to my eye) despite the broad range of settings and genres on offer. Nevertheless, only three can be at the point of my tetractys, and those three are Astropen, Peter V, and Phyrebrat.
 
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My Long List could easily have been every story! There were many creative and well-written stories. Well done, fellow writers!

My Long List, Short List, and *** Favorites ***:

*** Eclipse - Victoria Silverwolf ***

Symmetry – AltLifeAStory
*** Tommy in Time - Cat's Cradle ***
Forgotten Shores - Lawrence Twiddy
Home Beyond Stars – Guttersnipe
Cave of Illusion - JS Wiig
*** Worlds Apart - Peter V ***
The Green Giant - Ian Fortytwo
The Reedy Shoals of Havisham – Phyrebrat
The Magic Mirror – sule
The Maker of Rings - The Judge
The Dangers of Cold Calling - Perpetual Man
A person’s a person no matter how small – therapist
FROM THE DEEPEST DARK - Jo Zebedee
 
This was a batch of fantastic stories this time; it took a lot of reading and quibbling to come up with a shortlist and decide my votes.

Shortlist:
The Reedy Shoals of Havisham by Phyrebrat
Hebridean Overture by Dan Jones
Same Old Story by Bren G

VOTES:
Tommy in Time by Cat's Cradle
The Maker of Rings by The Judge
A person's a person no matter how small by therapist
 
Well that was difficult. This has got to be one of the best batches of stories ever in the history of mankind ;)


So, in keeping with the Olympics, here are the results of the Creative Writing Event

Bronze medals go to
Glossing the Globe - @BT Jones
Forgotten Shores - @Lawrence Twiddy
Cave of Illusion - @JS Wiig
Worlds Apart - @Peter V
The Green Giant. - @Ian Fortytwo
A person’s a person no matter how small - @therapist
Same Old Story - @Bren G

Silver medals go to
Eclipse - @Victoria Silverwolf
The Maker of Rings - @The Judge
The Dangers of Cold Calling - @Perpetual Man

Gold medals go to
Tommy in Time - @Cat's Cradle
First Contact at Summer Camp - @Luiglin
The Magic Mirror - @sule
 
Well that was difficult. This has got to be one of the best batches of stories ever in the history of mankind ;)


So, in keeping with the Olympics, here are the results of the Creative Writing Event

Bronze medals go to
Glossing the Globe - @BT Jones
Forgotten Shores - @Lawrence Twiddy
Cave of Illusion - @JS Wiig
Worlds Apart - @Peter V
The Green Giant. - @Ian Fortytwo
A person’s a person no matter how small - @therapist
Same Old Story - @Bren G

Silver medals go to
Eclipse - @Victoria Silverwolf
The Maker of Rings - @The Judge
The Dangers of Cold Calling - @Perpetual Man

Gold medals go to
Tommy in Time - @Cat's Cradle
First Contact at Summer Camp - @Luiglin
The Magic Mirror - @sule
Brilliantly done! (y):D
 
My my, lots of good ones this quarter! How does one choose? My third vote was truly a coin toss.


Honourable Mentions
@Astro Pen : Continuations - a sweet tale of existential dreams
@atsouthorn - The Fourth Dimension - a dimensional puzzle with humanity at its core. Extra points for embracing the challenge's subject too.
@BT Jones - Glossing the Globe - Like I've come to expect from BT, this tale brings the big ideas 'home' in humorous fashion
@Abernovo - Paradise Renewed - clean, easy to read, and packs a thoughtful punch. Just how I like 'em!
@Jo Zebedee - From the deepest dark - gripping, character driven from sadness to hope, like Ali's Rope a Dope.

Votes:
@AltLifeAStory - Symmetry - A magical debut to say the least. A thought-provoking story of the yin-yang that pervades through creation.
@Peter V - Worlds Apart - Mystery, intrigue, beauty are at the core of this precious story
@Ursa major - Imagineering - simplicity meets good narrative in this unpretentious illustration of the outworldly student slacker. Extra points too for embracing the subject matter head on.
 
Sigh! --- I lost track of this while we were housing assorted grandkids the past several days. Sorry about no 300 entry. I liked the picture a lot.

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@sule .... The Magic Mirror .... Sule writes us an interesting morality tale with a wonderful insight.

@Abernovo .... Paradise Renewed .... Aber gives us a glimpse of a possible future while writing a story with a moral of the present.

@Perpetual Man .... The Dangers of Cold Calling .... Perp brings a whole new line of thinking locks and into how things are really run.

@therapist .... A person’s a person no matter how small .... Therapist tells us a frightening tale of the unfortunate truth behind human decision making.

@elle telle .... Through a black market fold .... Elle telles a unique and wonderful tale of FTL, shoddy merchandise, but really comes through with a surprising ending.

@Bren G .... Same Old Story .... Bren reminds us that the more we change the more we let the same old passions rule us to our detriment.

@Jo Zebedee .... FROM THE DEEPEST DARK .... Jo pulls us into a world where reality, possibilities, and horror are all mixed up and unfortunately cannot be resisted.

@Daysman .... Telltails .... Daysman points out the any conclusion outside of the expected one not only demands extraordinary proof, but also those who can believe what the tales tell.

@Ursa major .... Imagineering .... Ursa introduces us to an engineer who really does what Disney says in does when it talks of Imagineering.


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I must admit that I'm having trouble concentrating so maybe I'm not making much sense or thinking straight. I don't know why. But here's the best I can do.

Short listed

The Forest Ring by @Rafellin because of the calm atmospheric myth it tells

*Eclipse by @Victoria Silverwolf because the main character made me think about how a prequel to the Wizard of Oz should have been written.

*Tommie in Time by @Cat's Cradle for wonderful time travel story which left me wondering "Who's mistaken here?"

Through a black Market fold by @elle telle because of the delightful and unexpected nature of the story.

*Same Old Story by @Bren G because the story captures a real piece of human essence.

*Votes


How long has this sat unsent? Sorry gang!
 
Thanks for the review, @Parson, and many thanks for the mention, @Bren G!
 

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