Discussion Thread - 300-word Writing Challenge #56 (January 2025)

@JS Wiig .... Looking Forward .... This is a story of quiet desperation quelled by a steely determination to be ready to see the best when the time comes.

@Guttersnipe .... Paradise Missing .... This is a story where lies form a kind of truth that dwells mostly in the emotions rather than in the facts.
 
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JS Wiig: The introspective nature of this tale of hard science fiction adds psychological realism to what is already a highly believable situation. The author depicts the narrator's emotions without resorting to melodrama.

Guttersnipe: The everyday details of life in this epistolary tale draw the reader into its imagined world. Through this technique, the surprising revelation at the end becomes even more powerful.
 

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