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but failing, turned and ran, and ran

I dodged its teeth, as it flew past my head..
 
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To Ice.monkey:

Smashing glass, in it came
Shattering the windowframe...

Otherwise:

I dodged its teeth, as it flew past my head...
For a minute there, I thought I was dead!

Fearing my life, I ran for the door...
 
Dam that rumpled rug as I tripped to the floor. . .

thumping to a stop, my heart surely it would pop . . .
 
Tripped up over a knot in the floor.
slid down the banisters, into the hall...
 
Can I just pop in and say that Pyan seems to be really slow this morning? :p And pop out again goes I.
 
pyanfaruk said:
Tripped up over a knot in the floor.
slid down the banisters, into the hall...
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looking behind, surely these that chase seem ten feet tall!!


Tired and persued, thus I fled on trainers most underused.
 
I saw what one should never have to see.

Thes beast was chasing, closing the gap fast...
 
and that's when I ran, slap bang, into a large tree


surely now, my end it had come...

EDIT: Damn you Lenny!!!! And so to follow your post...

and my legs at this pace would no longer last.


I had to come up with something real quick...
 
he came at me with anger, for that swing surely I must pay . .


rolling under his leaping charge, I sprint on from his assault, his perpetual barrage . . .
 
for an instant like Tony Blair, I could have sworn.


but it shimmered and waved until it became...
 
a DEMON of such height n girth none had I seen the same . . .


it's hungry glare it's lustful leer, oh my lord how I quake and fear . . .
 
but, hark, is that a chorus of angels coming near?


or have I gone mad like a psychiatrist?
 
counterposed with a body of power and grace.


Hope laughed from within me gleefully
 
But I could not run, with a wall at my back.

I crouched down low, trying to hide from the beast...
 
but it's eyes like beads would not release . . .

I went for a stone, pitted and worn . . .
 
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