Creative rhyming

For I did not want my skin to be torn.

My questing hand found a stone, and brandishing it like a knife...
 
it was useless as he tore me to bits, ending right there my life...


too slow the angel arrived at the scene...
 
I can see just what's going on in your head!

Would you like to be pals? I can tell by your eyes...
 
What on earth did Pyan just reply to, out of interest? :confused:

Hey! You changed it. No fair. :(

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But to tell the truth, it comes as a surprise.

So all this chasing has just been for a friend?
 
said/head! :confused:

Confession - forgot to update the page!!:eek::eek::eek:
 
You replied with "bore" first.

Don't think I didn't see! I know your sneaky ways, Pyanfaruk! You used the EDIT button!
 
" if the gods hadn't meant us to edit, they would disable the button"
Anyway, I apologized!


So all this chasing has just been for a friend?
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I'm afraid it's come to a very bad end

So the moral of all this seems to be...
 
You only apologised after I had posted. AND you used the EDIT button again. :(

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Right... confusion now sets it...

Someone reply to Pyans line, I haven't the foggiest what to put. :p
 
lookin at the soles of his feet now dear demon he is but saying bye . . .



anger and full of rancor, the monster picked up and hurled an anchor . . .
 
'ere! Memnochs doing it now! you going to shout at him, Lenny??:D
 
I don't see the point any more... the whole thing is spiralling out of control. :(

I think we ought to just start a new poem, or go back to a rhyming couplet, and then another one on a completely different subject.
 
This all went way out of control. I responded to Lenny's post who then deleted his. Memnoch at the same time posted a reply to pyan's last, but when he saw mine he edited his to follow from me. But at exactly the same time I deleted my post as it followed Lenny's but Lenny had deleted his so mine made no sense and now Memnoch's makes no sense..............

So what now?
 
There once was a man from Kentucky . . . who like nowt more than gobblin' a butty . . .
 
I think we should start again. It did get a little mad back there.:D

So...Who'll start?

Whoops! I was a bit slow there! Sorry about that.
 
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BTW, loved that image, Memnoch!:D
You going to start a new one, then, Lenny? Change subject after each couplet, then...
 
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