Sounds like a challenge
Well, as disclaimer, the
Dhalgren joke floats around on Usenet and elsewhere - I didn't make that one up.
While this allows for some fascinating ideas to chew on (as in Babel 17, which is very much about -- that is, primarily focused on as a plot element, rather than using the text to examine while the actual elements of plot are something else -- language)
That's part of my issue: it may be okay in criticism but it's grabbing the wrong end of the stick in fiction, to me. Not that Vance's
The Languages of Pao is the greatest thing ever, but it's good and an example of having a book about language that doesn't get quite as lost in itself.
His writing style is challenge sure when you arent used to him. You thought his style was very wierd for SF atleast for what you expect.
It's not just his style in a purely linguistic/literary sense. His books don't evoke much appealing to me. Characters, settings, psychological foci, whatever. He's just playing a different game - seeing SF as purely a language game or a form of psychoanalysis or mythology or whatever. Kind of like Joseph Campbell is to John Campbell - Delany is to center-SF. Ideally, SF would be more about externality - the impacts of real or hypothetical technologies on real planets and people. We already have myth, fantasy, and language games if we want myth, fantasy, and language games.
But I can't really say - I only read a few books and no non-fiction of his and these are flash-impressions. I didn't find it compelling enough to explore it enough even for the purposes of attempted refutation. (If that makes any sense.)
Hm. Now that I think of it, it's like he was learning SF. Like a
foreign language, speaking of "Notes on the Language of Science Fiction". Like an academic - an anthropologist - trying to pass as "one of them". But SF is just something you're raised in or you come to it and you just
get it or you don't. You are
of science fiction. You don't quite so consciously learn it and mimic it.
So his books come off as rather fake, to be frank. Like at the circus, where they put an elephant in a tutu and have it awkwardly dance about. Delany puts on SF and staggers about for hundreds of overweighted/overloaded pages.
I think
Nova wears its tutu more gracefully than
Babel-17 or
The Einstein Intersection, though either are better than
Dhalgren.
But, like I say, I dunno what I'm talking about.