re: Discussing the Writing Challenges -- September and October
I don't think mine needs any clarification, but I'll throw down some details about it regardless.
The basic storyline is that of a noble of the space-faring future named Picuro. Picuro is an adaptation of the name Epicurus (famous philosopher, some may have heard of him?) I chose his name because of his pondering on what was, in all essence, the basis of all sins - desire.
He took his fleet of gilded warships to the planet of Sodora (contracted adaptation of Sodom and Gomorrah). He is there in response to "insults of the most dire kind" which were sent against him by relatives of his wife.
His wife, Aspasia is a reference to the same-named historical/mythical figure who was the consort of Pericles and a brothel owner/harlot.
In the end, Picuro is left between two alternatives, both with unappealing outcomes. If he commences the attack on the salnderers, he will have slain his fellow men and will lose his wife as a result of murdering her family. If he withdraws, he will look weak in the face of his fellow nobles, which may open him up to future attacks.
So in summary we have:
Envy - His wife's relatives slander him out of jealousy for his station.
Pride - Picuro cannot let a slight pass and must act on his pride.
Wrath - Picuro's wrath leads him to the unjustified slaughter of a planet.
Lust - Picuro doesn't care so much about his wife's feelings so much as he cares about being able to touch her.
Greed - Weak - Representation of his decadent, gilded warships in great numbers for his orbital bombardment; the excess alone might warrent the idea of greed.
Sloth - By definition, uncertainty and inaction are sloth. His inability to choose a path at the end marks this point.
Gluttony - Gluttony is but a greed of a different shade; it would have been a waste for me to use any of the 75 words trying to jam it in.
End comment - Orbital bombardment seems to be the ideal solution for Sodom and Gomorrah, no matter what form it may take