Karn, I laughed out loud. It's brilliant
I think we all feel that about our own work, nixie. One of the reasons I always leave my entry until late (that and the fact that inspiration takes forever to strike!). It's an intriguing little tale, and no doubt will get Parson's exorcism fingers twitching.
Boneman, I never figured you for a friend of... er... better not go down that road, in case it gives the game away... (or are you an Aussie** in disguise?)
** spelling may vary...
But enough of the Shadow Secretary of State for Wales...!Sex, killing and physical mutilation, Mouse. Right up your street!
except it isn't pronounced Sam-hain, as I understand it, but Sow-ain, just to make life complicated.
Bomb and bomber
The final section is called 'The Heart in Conflict', based on Nobel Prize-winner William Faulkner's statement that, "the human heart in conflict with itself alone can make good writing because only that is worth writing about." This appears to be GRRM's philosophy and lends itself to his 'furniture rule', that a story is just a story and is an SF tale or a Fantasy or a Western purely due to the 'furniture': a guy riding into a frontier town to settle a score or anothe man riding into a castle to challenge the wizard who wronged him or another person flying his spaceship in pursuit of an alien who has a grudge against him.
Sex, killing and physical mutilation, Mouse. Right up your street!
(Just as long as Mouse doesn't choose "Erotic Fantasy" or somesuch...)
(80 for Mouse )