Discussing the Writing Challenges -- November and December 2010

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I'm very impressed with everyone's entries this month. It was hard, but I did make my choice in the end - I can see many people are having similar difficulties. There is one leader, but the rest are spread out quite a bit.

I personally feel good just being mentioned in a short list.
 
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My list was between Chris, Judge, HJ and Parson. Last minute quick change of mind, I went for Parson. :)
 
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I can see the theme for the next challenge, should Chris win:

Write a story inspired by the chosen theme, in 75 words or less
There should be a witty, clever story, packed with express and implied description
The title may be up to 75 words but is not part of the word count -- or the story
One entry per person
Prose or poetry

Story may be science fiction or fantasy

Voters must submit a completed spreadsheet indicating the points earned by each story in decimal, hexadecimal and binary notations, for all twenty ratings criteria. You may only vote once.

Yes, I am aware that's not how it should be done, but so many stories, each with strengths, none (if I dare say it) bad enough that it can be discarded out of hand…

I've never resorted to anything like that for the photo challenge, but I could see no way round it here. And Pasrson, I can't attach .xls files, and if I put it down as an image it would be so teetzie-weenie that you couldn't read anything. Anyway, I've got a separate list with my categories and how many points I thought they were important, (which you would want to personalise, anyway) and just A, B, C… at the top of the columns; otherwise it would have been impossibly wide.

But it's just a standard Excel chart; anyone who is the slightest bit talented with these machines could do as well, or better.

But I am beginning to see why there are fewer people contributing votes than stories; it's harder work.

Now, does anyone remember who wrote the short story about a particularly nasty pervert who collected and killed little girls (drove an icecream truck) until the one he couldn't separate from her Teddybear, with the investigating policeman trying to explain away his death and dismemberment? I had it pegged as a Sturgeon, but I couldn't recognise it among his shorts. No, I don't need to read it again, I have it very nicely between my ears, and it isn't worth going to book search.
 
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Mouse, You made my day!! To get a vote is wonderful!! To get one from a person who has written 3 contenders in a row makes it even better. Maybe we should meld our stories and call it something like Yin and Yang.:D

Chris,
I have just one thing to say: Huh?:confused:
 
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I should really get around to voting, I guess. I've been so slack this month, I don't even have a shortlist...
 
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At this point, Cul, if you want to vote fairly, pick one at random. :p Scroll your screen up and down with your eyes closed, stop at a random moment, and choose whatever is at the top, perhaps.
 
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At this point, Cul, if you want to vote fairly, pick one at random. :p Scroll your screen up and down with your eyes closed, stop at a random moment, and choose whatever is at the top, perhaps.

What if I'm at the top? It definitely won't be a vote for a worthy winner then...
 
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As each challenge goes by, I want more and more votes, because there are so many stories that deserve equally to win!

by Dusty Zebra
Make sure you note the number of sneezes per story in your spreadsheet.

Won't they be all over the spreadsheet, anyway?
 
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Okay, reading through them now. My shortlist, in order of posting:

Karn
mygoditsraining
CyBeR
Wybren

A very short list - there were more I might have listed, but I was brutal. And from these four, I voted for Wybren. Loved the tone of the story, and I really felt like you crafted an intriguing little world in seventy-five words. I'd love to read more about it, and in the end that's why my vote landed there...
 
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I've been dipping in and out of the challenge thread and getting nowhere. As I've left myself so liitle time, I've adapted a process similar to the Bubble sort: asking if the each next story is better than the current holder of the top spot and if it is, making that the holder. (Because I like to mention runners up and Honourable Mentions, I did this in parallel.)

This worked fine, except that I had too many runners up and HMs. After much hacking back, I'm left with the following:




Honourable Mentions:
  • The Long Awaited Apotheosis of Arthur James Seymour III by chopper
  • No-one Knows by Lenny
  • Elevator by onebigpotato
  • Wonderful Wonderings by Moonbat**
  • Chosen by StormFeather
Runners Up:
  • Naughty by Mouse (Quirky and funny)
  • Teddy by Hoopy (This was my decision, not Thread Bear's)
  • Bright City, Bright Light (Clever and darkly funny)
Winner:
  • A Dragon's Prayer by Parson (I've chosen another poem! And I don't really like poetry. And it's sentimental***; but in a good way.)



** - In spite of some iffy punctuation.

*** - Or is it? Am I the only one who can see a possibly dark ending...? :eek:
 
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Okay, reading through them now. My shortlist, in order of posting:

Karn
mygoditsraining
CyBeR
Wybren

A very short list - there were more I might have listed, but I was brutal. And from these four, I voted for Wybren. Loved the tone of the story, and I really felt like you crafted an intriguing little world in seventy-five words. I'd love to read more about it, and in the end that's why my vote landed there...

YAY I got a vote, that is so cool. Thank you :)
 
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You vote in a similar way to me, Ursa!
 
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Yay, I got an honourable mention :)
Though tainted by iffy punctuation :( still that can be remedied.
Thanks Ursa
 
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Mouse, You made my day!! To get a vote is wonderful!! To get one from a person who has written 3 contenders in a row makes it even better.

Not a contender this time, but ta! :D I voted for you cos I thought yours was the best.
 
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I have a similar method to Ursa's, too.

I'm also stuck this month. I'm torn between Lenny's, Hoopy's, and Mosaix's....

I better have a good think today. :eek:
 
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Winner:
  • A Dragon's Prayer by Parson (I've chosen another poem! And I don't really like poetry. And it's sentimental***; but in a good way.)

*** - Or is it? Am I the only one who can see a possibly dark ending...? :eek:

Ursa: Thanks so much! I am going to like bubbles even more after your vote. As to the possible dark ending; I likely wouldn't write it that way, but life experience more than tells me that a dark ending is more than possible. And if this poem were worked into something more developed, at least the temptation of the dark side would be there.

Mouse: I would disagree about your not being a contender for a third time. You made a lot of short lists and got some votes, and you are not so far behind that a last minute rush to the title is unthinkable. I suppose to make a "football" analogy: you are at least as much of a contender as England was in the World Cup this year.
 
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