Re: DISCUSSION, 300 Word Challenge, April
Well got just thought I'd complete my comments and post them:
Ursa - There is so much going on in this one, that I don't really know where to begin. As could be expected from our regular pun meister this is riddled with depth and double/triple, perhaps even quadruple meaning. It deserves/needs to be read again and again just to begin to understand what is going on - and that is only if you have all the information at hand. The entire thing is in some ways a giant pun, encapsulating certain members of the Chrons, a self contained Universe all to itself, I'm sure I could read this again and find more hidden away in almost every word. Very, very clever.
Stormfeather - A rather different take on the picture, that was both refreshing and touching. Introducing the story with a horoscope reading was a great way of leading into an emotive story, that was well written and told, with a beautiful supernatural twist, that gave both warmth and comfort in a trying situation. I loved the way the 'spirits' were presented and the feel that even in a close death situation there are those that still watch over us.
Precise Calibre - A great little SF story, that really caught the feeling of a destroyed world, fallen into decay and destruction, with nothing left but ruins. Humanity and all its works little more than ruins, little more than a curiosity. Within the centre of it all the clock, marking not just time but the passage of time, and a view through alien eyes of how different perspectives of time and how necessary or unnecessary that might actually be. Probably a pain to type those alien names though, bet spellchecker loved them, and a great punch line!
Cul - Despite all Cul said about rushing this, I really enjoyed this one. It was a good way to end the challenge, with another different interpretation of the picture that worked well. Two beings passing through the ages, one using magic to update herself, the other clockwork, until it is little more than a clock, but still a balance against the others evil. And yet all the same, they are still in love. Excellent.
Now to consider my vote... uhh votes