Re: Discussion 300 Word Challenge #2
Thank you, everyone! I have to say I remain amazed, astounded, astonished, flabbergasted and generally gob-smacked, too, that so many people liked my story enough to vote for it, especially in view of the quality of all the other entries. And I do apologise for the lack of tension over the last few days.
Cul, don't worry. My partner was exactly the same when he read it, and it genuinely made me wonder whether it was worth posting. I knew not everyone would get the name -- though I did expect Parson to know the origin and meaning of his adversary's title!! -- and that the story as a whole would rather lose its point as a result. I hesitated over the title a long while, as I was thinking of calling it "Bringer of Light" to drive the point home, (the translation I knew instead of "bearer") though in the end I preferred the ambiguity of the ellipsis. I did debate posting a rather non-subtle hint in the Discussion thread at one point, though.
Anyway, a big thank you to those who put me on a shortlist and to those who voted for me, not all of whom I've named as I've gone through. And a massive thank you to everyone for taking part and for making our Second 300 Challenge such a success. Now for the next one!
Thank you, everyone! I have to say I remain amazed, astounded, astonished, flabbergasted and generally gob-smacked, too, that so many people liked my story enough to vote for it, especially in view of the quality of all the other entries. And I do apologise for the lack of tension over the last few days.
Cul, don't worry. My partner was exactly the same when he read it, and it genuinely made me wonder whether it was worth posting. I knew not everyone would get the name -- though I did expect Parson to know the origin and meaning of his adversary's title!! -- and that the story as a whole would rather lose its point as a result. I hesitated over the title a long while, as I was thinking of calling it "Bringer of Light" to drive the point home, (the translation I knew instead of "bearer") though in the end I preferred the ambiguity of the ellipsis. I did debate posting a rather non-subtle hint in the Discussion thread at one point, though.
Anyway, a big thank you to those who put me on a shortlist and to those who voted for me, not all of whom I've named as I've gone through. And a massive thank you to everyone for taking part and for making our Second 300 Challenge such a success. Now for the next one!