Pyan – I did wonder where we were going with this story to begin with and had images of PlayElf or PentFairyPalace, but was relieved to see that the material requested was even dodgier again. Practical Electronics in a world of magic and wonder? Now that is truly uncanny.
AMB – So a little band of thieves are nearly undone by one of their gang sticking to a modus operandi that made him easily identifiable to the law. What is clever here is what is not said, but you can see by reading between the lines – and also something very real perhaps, someone who is so good at what they do, so confident in one area (magical in this case) can be so sorely lacking in another (common sense).
Mosaix – A nice take on the theme, giving us a story that is slightly unsettling at the same time a help group in an institution somewhere, a prison for mass murders of all description, but even in this group of killers there is a pariah, one who stooped to killing in the mundane, with a non-mystical weapon, and in a world of magic that is truly uncanny.
High Eight – There was something almost mundane in this one, with just the hint of the fantastical, and it is that which really made the story work so well. Miners trapped underground, left to die in the name of ‘safety’ and expediency, with no hope of compensation for their families is a story that might have come from the real world... but the delicious ending hints at the possibility that they might be coming back...
TDZ – Ahh, a tale that made me chuckle, not just for the effect of having a television running and the way it was received in a world of magic, but the way it was perceived as being different as well – and yet still magic, but also for what was being watched on the box too...
DarkPoet – Another humorous tale, that works well. The frustration of someone who seems to have achieved the impossible is not really understandable, especially as it is not only the success that has cheered him but the prospect of infinite wealth too. Of course that kind of success would make the loss of the of the potion even worse...
Slindeman – I was really taken with some of the ideas in this attempt, the idea of a house burrowing, just felt like a casual display of genius – a hobbit hole trying to get away. The fact that it seemed almost alive, weeping walls, while stable at the same time – the rooms seemed to be in the same place – just added to the feel of a distorted norm. I’m not sure whether the mum was behind the collapsing wall or whether her disappearance was part of a bigger problem, but it was certainly a story of ideas.