Discussion -- 300 Word Challenge #8

Thank you, Springs, for the mention on your shortlist.

And I am thrilled to find I have two votes! Thank you very much, Allmywires and Talysia.
 
Was a hard decision, but my three votes go to Julliana, Grinnel and Crystal Haven. All three I thought were very well written and had a good emotional feel to the writing.



Thanks, Idiot_prince, for the vote.
 
Yikes, votes! Thanks very much springs and Lenny. And thanks to Bowler for the mention.
 
You're welcome Teresa.

I'm having a hard time trying to pick my votes. I hope I can figure this out by tomorrow.

You and me both SB, I'm burying my head in the sand and pretending I've already voted. No one will notice
 
I'm so sorry for the rushed message, please forgive me; I am going to Ghana for dance training and need to be up early - am running late. I'm not back till 19th and didn't want to miss the votes.

Shortlist:
Luiglin - Paradise....Lost
Mouse - Liver Forever, Die Alone
Perpetual Man - Requiem
Stormcrow - Pearlman's Escape
Grinnel - Home
Johnnyjet - The Bones left by the Storm

Votes to:
Luiglin, Mouse, Perp.

I usually do a few lines on what I like on each story but I will have to dash. Flight at 9.30, and it's 1.05 now.

A massive thanks to Springs for the vote :):)

See you all on the 19th!!!! I doubt I'll manage the 75 word this month <sniff> :(

pH
 
yw though i didnt know u could tell who voted for who lol

Yup, you can either click at the bottom on "view poll results" (something like that), or click on any of the vote totals where they are highlighted, and it will pop them all open for you to see. After you vote, it generally shows all the votes when you go into the poll, without having to do anything at all.

We're sneaky that way. :D
 
A great set of stories, thanks to all. My favourites were:

springs - Song of the faerie - loved the deliberate ambiguity, is it, isn't it...
Mouse - Live Forever, Die Alone
allmywires - The Queen of the Sea
Perpetual Man - Requiem
stormcrow - Pearlman's Escape
Victoria Silverwolf - CANCER NIGHT


My overall favourite was Perpetual Man's Requiem. But votes to the three in bold.
 
Woo! Thanks for the votes, Bowler and amw. Thanks for the mention, springs :)
 
Wow! Two votes overnight, many thanks Phyrebrat and Glen, very much appreciated.

A nice start to the day.
 
Blimey, can we end the poll now quick, while I'm in the lead? :D Thanks amw, Karn and Phyrebrat! And Glen for the mention. :)
 
Damn it! I had my story all written out, with just a little more editing needed. I must have confused the poll closing date with the closing for entries date :(

Oh well, here is my story anyway:

After the pass, at the head of wadi Shafiq, we decended to where the dunes of the Empty Quarter lapped against the bare rocky flanks of the mountains.
Two days we crossed those sifting sands, until the ocean grew from glittering slither below the horizon to stretch out vast and endless before us. But as we approached the shoreline, the perfect vanishing lines of the sky, sea and sand were broken by jagged structures strung out along the spine of the beach.

"Ruins, most likely, of the peoples who once lived here," Ibrah posited from a distance, in his most knowledgable and sagely manner. "Before the long winter, before the desert brushed all aside, this land was fertile and rich in ground water."

However, it was to everyone's astonishment, including Ibrah's, that his analysis was proven fiction upon closer inspection.
"Are those... giant sea flowers?" I recall gasping in awe. Perhaps the size of a house; Far larger than the crusty rusted metal bars and jagged strips that grew on the scum-line of the beaches back home.
"One supposes they have never been harvested, simply allowed to grow gargantuan."
"They seems to have formed a lattice structure, like the ribs of a whale," was I recall . For conversation was cut short by the call of our guide, racing down the beach towards the camel train.
"There is a storm! A storm's coming!" he cried. "We must find shelter!"

The sun was sinking fast, into the distant, yet fast approaching tide, as we lashed all the fabrics and cloth we could find to the sides of the flower. Even as the first razor sharp sands began to rasp our faces, the rising waters had already covered our ankles.

I will never forget waiting for the storm to pass that night.
 

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