Starbeast: The three stooges find their way into an alien fantasy, and as usual, mess it up, but survive. Funny and inventive look at the genre, which works very well.
Maybe we should set up a roster so Perp Victoria and Starbeast get this every month, in return for their sterling efforts. I've done mine, reckon I've got at least three years until my next one...
Thanks for the review Boneman. You did see the Three Stooges in my effort, I'm impressed, because I almost went that route, my character Stumpy was going to be called Shemp, but I like Stumpy better.
A Roster for the reviewers, aww, aren't you knid. I'm touched. I personally am not going to push for that idea, but if it happens, wow, I'd be stunned
Thanks very much to Victoria, Starbeast, and Perp for the reviews. I know that doing so takes time and energy away from other things, and it is very much appreciated.
Not sure why, but I've stayed away from this challenge since its inception, but I saw the picture, thoughts stirred, and so I jumped in.
Now, after reading the entries for this challenge (and a few from past ones), I think it may have been a simple intimidation factor keeping me at bay. I am more than impressed at what has been presented with a higher (but still extremely modest) word count of 300. Truly some great stuff from all comers.
You're welcome RoninJedi84.
Never be put off by the other stories, and feel you might be substandard. I've seen people worried for nothing that had great tales to post. To lessen the preasure of what your idea is for a challenge, don't look at anyone's entry until you've written your own story (this really works for me).
I'm glad you joined us this month.
Well, I've enjoyed reading through the stories and this thread - my first time doing either. Such an array of styles, content and approach - and I've got to say you're all an absolute credit to this forum in the way you conduct yourselves in the discussion too. Not sure many other sites could boast such an open and friendly atmosphere.
Happy to hear you are comfortable here Fritzciv. That's why I love to hang out on this site. And I highly agree, there are a great deal of amazing writers here.
Nice to meet you.
Alchemist - Highly entertaining tale about trying to improve things with fantastic technology, only to become a victim of it. Then, having that artificial intellengence have the same problems. Well done sir.
Mith - An excellent drama with (and I love how you put it) disturbing intensity. A very sad story that embraces the heart and fades like a setting sun. Wonderfully written ghost story. Nice to meet you.
Cab - Superbly curjoured offering about a sorcereress and her feathery familiar. An involving entry that adds spice with it's dark dialogue, which reads amazingly like a chapter from a fairy tale. Nice to meet you.
The Spurring Platty - Delightful story that blossums with a great fabled explanation about how the Hooded Crows came to be. Plus a cool capper to this treat, where a crow eerily seems to understand what was said. Awesome.
Abernovo - Cyber-crows are the main characters in this astonishing science fiction story, in which a plot is formed to overthrow two world leaders in an apocalytic setting. Very cool.
TheDustyZebra - A magical story of royalty and intense drama that leads to devastating tragedy. Wow, this is an incredible and hard hitting fantasy that does not have a happy ending. Powerful and great.
Chrispenycate - Who needs 300 words to write something that will be memorable, and this is a excellent example of that. A crow relays the narrative about what he has observed from humans. Darkly insightful, and very entertaining.
Mosaix - "Heh heh heh". Yes, I had to give a chuckle when I finished this feathery treat that definately held my interest and dazzled me with a match between an average human and an overconfident A.I. bird droid. Marvelously executed.
Fitzchiv - Exceedingly and emotionally moving tale that tugs at the heart and creeps forward into dramatic decay. Well written in an atmossphere I can easily image that is bland and dying. Well done. Nice to meet you.
Crow. - A uniquely written story that percolates with a surreal atmosphere. Like dark poetry that paints a disturbing, yet remarkable picture that must be carefully studied to reveal it's true meaning. Nice to meet you.
Dream Walker - Yes! A monster tale, with Windigo (or Wendigo)creatures. Tremendous story highlighted with Native American legend that is sprinked with action, it got me involved immedately. Good stuff.
The Judge - Whoa! The Judge pumps out yet another mighty tale from her seemingly endless supply of fantastic ideas. With that said, I must tip my hat to this astounding entry which took me by surprise. I hope I didn't flatter you too much, because there is
a lot of heavy competition you're among.
Jastius - Alright, a tale of gypsies! I'm so glad you made it, and just in the nick-of-time too. This offerng displays wonderfully, the rough and tough lives of a magical band of gypsies. Marvelous idea!