Discussion - 300 Word Challenge #11

[Juliana]

Twerking, now, that would be a whole different 300 entry!

 

[Tywin]

I've got my story, and it was really fun to write.

Now to sit and stew on it for a couple days and have a chance to see all the problems with it.

 

[alchemist]

I've got my story, and it was really fun to write.

Now to sit and stew on it for a couple days and have a chance to see all the problems with it.

Or come up with two others and not know which to enter.

 

[Mith]

Hmm I wonder if my story would be better with a bit of twerking in there...

 

[Ursa major]

Twerking, now, that would be a whole different 300 entry!

What makes you think that some of us weren't already planning stories about people bumming around the Outback, based solely on what we can see in Cul's picture?

 

[Tywin]

I've still got 11 words left over... I could totally add twerking.

 

[ratsy]

I've still got 11 words left over... I could totally add twerking.

Vampiro slayed everyone...then twerked until he dropped.

You have room to add this to the end then

 

[Bowler1]

You know, I really like this picture but so far when it comes to ideas I've been a bit blank, which is not usually me. I'll head off down the shooting range and blast away with me RAY GUNS, it usually helps.

 

[Mouse]

Oh dear, shouldn't have mentioned the twerking! I dare someone to get that in their story...

 

[ratsy]

Maybe next month's 75 word should be Twerking as a theme??? okay, maybe not

 

[Mouse]

If the theme of the 75 worder is ever Twerking, I promise I will enter.

 

[Tywin]

It would work great with this month's 75 word theme actually. I could think of half a dozen ghost stories involving twerking: The ghost of a girl who died twerking, a ghost that posesses people and makes them twerk, summoning ghosts through a seance-twerk, the long dark twerk of death, your great-great-grandmother's puritanical ghost commenting on twerking, a bone-chillingly-scary ghost that tracks people down and in the end just wants to twerk with them, etc.

 

[ratsy]

"I thought they said get twerk sir...not get to work...my bad"

 

[Ursa major]

I've got a potential final line for that 75-worder:

"Then I suggest you go twerk on an egg, Chicken Little."
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[jastius]

"If the theme of the 75 worder is ever Twerking, I promise I will enter."

wug? i have never heard of that word.

okay.. googled it.. apparently its something you do at walmart...

 

[TheDustyZebra]

Can I come live with you, in that lovely place?

 

[hopewrites]

I'm sure that's a fairy mini-van with luggage strapped on top driving down from the main fork.
Is anyone else seeing a fay mini-van? or should I balance my diet of chocolate out with something less hallucinogenic?

 

[Bowler1]

Am I on the right thread, the 300? Has Hopewrites been giving out too many chocolates?

My RAY GUNS worked a treat (two glasses of red wine) and I have my idea, a nice big lump of telling. I know the advice I've been giving out in the critique section, but I'm allowed, I'm special! Some polishing still needed, so I'll just rest here on this big black pot while I do.

 

[Mr Orange]

right so my draft is done. 550 words that need whittling down. after a relatively dark 75 word entry this one is more, well, silly....

a weekend of twerking and should be ready to go...

 

[jastius]

why do so many people like walmart?