Discussion thread -- SEVENTY-FIVE WORD WRITING CHALLENGE November 2013

[Juliana]

Thanks for the review jastius! Very much appreciated.

 

[Mr Orange]

Thanks muchly for the review Victoria

 

[Jo Zebedee]

Thanks for the review, Jastius. Enticingly pleasing. I like that.

 

[Perpetual Man]

Take my eye off the thread for a day or two and look what happens, Jastius does a series of reviews.
(Then Karn compares him to me for which I can only apologise Jastius )

Thanks very much for the review, I know how much time and effort it takes to do these things and appreciate it a lot. I like your interpretation of my story - which must be quite hard to decipher in some ways and you hit the nail on the head.

Obviously anything else that needs to be said I'll say after the voting.

 

[David Evil Overlord]

Um, Perp..Jastius is a her, not a him...

 

[chrispenycate]

Thank you, jastius, for your review of my piece (although I do not sport a prowess. My craft has a dragon figurehead).

Does this exercise mean that you will be continuing as long as Karn remains obdurate (wheedle, wheedle)?

 

[jastius]

Um, Perp..Jastius is a her, not a him...

who peeked?
(and what are you trying to do with that hedgehog, david? no wonder you keep running through your happyfaces.. )

thankyou perp, really appreciate your input upon my semi-literate ramblings. thankyou springs sorry about the infestation of alliteration..(its like hiccups.. it just happens)

 

[ratsy]

Um, Perp..Jastius is a her, not a him...

I always assumed Jastius to be a her as well. Funny thing this internet.

Here DEO, put this back on

 

[TheDustyZebra]

Um, Perp..Jastius is a her, not a him...

I don't know -- have you seen the hunky guy who is playing her in the Chrons 2 movie?

 

[Perpetual Man]

Um, Perp..Jastius is a her, not a him...

who peeked?
(and what are you trying to do with that hedgehog, david? no wonder you keep running through your happyfaces. )

thankyou perp, really appreciate your input upon my semi-literate ramblings. thankyou springs sorry about the infestation of alliteration..(its like hiccups.. it just happens)

Oops and to make it worse I knew that. It's what you get when you decide to make a post first thing in the morning, with breakfast in three different places, two voices competing with one another, sour milk and two bloodthirsty rabbits to feed. (And that is a quiet morning)

 

[jastius]

make pancakes and scones with the soured milk..(also makes lovely waffles.. do you need a recipe?) give the bunnies a piece of carrot or birdseed or greens or wood to gnaw.. and invest in one of those take a number spindles so everyone waits his turn..
(and i really don't mind perp... never knew myself until i was three and someone told me..)

 

[alchemist]

Oops and to make it worse I knew that. It's what you get when you decide to make a post first thing in the morning, with breakfast in three different places, two voices competing with one another, sour milk and two bloodthirsty rabbits to feed. (And that is a quiet morning)

Bloodthirsty rabbits? Um, something's gone horribly wrong here. I suggest letting them outside in daylight.

 

[ratsy]

Bunnicula? no wait he was a vegetarian

 

[AnyaKimlin]

Funny I've got man hating rabbits in my detective stories. Attila the Bun and Bun Ladin.

 

[Juliana]

Bloodthirsty rabbits? Um, something's gone horribly wrong here. I suggest letting them outside in daylight.

Perp, did you feed them after midnight?

 

[Perpetual Man]

make pancakes and scones with the soured milk..(also makes lovely waffles.. do you need a recipe?) give the bunnies a piece of carrot or birdseed or greens or wood to gnaw.. and invest in one of those take a number spindles so everyone waits his turn..
(and i really don't mind perp... never knew myself until i was three and someone told me..)

Oooh waffles... the boys love waffles.

And the rabbits. Or gremlins perhaps. Not sure about the brown one, but the white ones nicer mother wad in Monty Python and the Holy Grail.

 

[Rolynd]

Never tried a challenge before but I love sci-fi detective novels for some reason so had to have a go!

Some great entries this month.

 

[David Evil Overlord]

who peeked?
(and what are you trying to do with that hedgehog, david? no wonder you keep running through your happyfaces.. )

Who said I was peeking? Who was peeking at me while I was peeking...um, not that I was peeking...

And it's what you CAN'T do with a hedgehog...in the Discworld books, there is a witch named Nanny Ogg, whio has outlived three husbands and an unspecified number of lovers. Nanny Ogg's favourite folk song is The Hedgehog Can Never Be Buggered At All. In one book, she translates the song into "foreign", as Il Porcupino Nil Sodomy Est.

Oooh waffles... the boys love waffles.

And the rabbits. Or gremlins perhaps. Not sure about the brown one, but the white ones nicer mother wad in Monty Python and the Holy Grail.

Thou needest the Holy Hand Grenade, Sire.

 

[Victoria Silverwolf]

Rolynd -- Suggests much that is left unsaid, creating a moody back story and great suspense.

 

[Tywin]

And it's what you CAN'T do with a hedgehog...

You can bugger a bear,
if you do it with care,
You can bugger a frog in a puddle or pool,
or with a giraffe if you stand on a stool,
but the hedgehog...