Discussion Thread -- SEVENTY-FIVE WORD WRITING CHALLENGE -- December 2013

Ok, SciFi is very, very good. Faith is seasonal, problematic, and a tough one to pull off.

After all - Do aliens know it Christmas? Did a spaceman come travelling on a white Christmas, on a silent night during a winter wonderland?
 
Do aliens know it Christmas? Did a spaceman come travelling on a white Christmas, on a silent night during a winter wonderland?
...is Santa's sleigh susceptible to shots from a ray gun...? :eek:
 
Ok, SciFi is very, very good. Faith is seasonal, problematic, and a tough one to pull off.

After all - Do aliens know it Christmas? Did a spaceman come travelling on a white Christmas, on a silent night during a winter wonderland?

damn you bowler, now i have a SF version of live aid's "do they know it's christmas" in my head and it won't go!!

now can i work that into a story?.... hmmm...

Edit: by the way interesting theme culhwch, will need a bit of thought
 
...is Santa's sleigh susceptible to shots from a ray gun...? :eek:

It's Christmas time,
there's no need to be afraid.
Dum, de, dee (I never know all the words)
we can spread a smile of Joy
De, Dee... dum
Where the Christmas bells that are ringing
de, dee... Doom
Well, tonight thank God it's Santa instead of you. ;)

That request was for Mr Orange - Here's to you, dededum, underneath that buring gun....
 
Cool entries so far. I thought I was going to write a few of these then choose but I really liked the first one i thought up. Hope you guys like it too.
 
I really like the choice, so thanks Cul. Got the seed of an idea and it is germinating nicely.

I have actually been missing the comments. I know they take a lot of time, and my heart was not in it as much as it used to, but I have missed doing them - especially as it helped me make a decision at the end of the month...

I also missed doing the more off the wall, fun comments like I did all those years ago at the beginning... where I wrote everyone's name in hexadecimal or in a certain style...

So as its the Christmas month...
 
Santa shot through the sky Rudolph leading the way. Below the world glistened lights bright against the dark, streets and houses, all that needed gifts delivered. Without a pause he stuck one red gloved hand into the bulging sack and looked at the name on it.

“Well, well well,” he chuckled in his booming tones,


Springs - I do believe that my ability to fly around the world is one of those things that cause the older children to doubt my existence, it is a sad loss of innocence, but often truths can be found in the most unlikely of places. Never under-estimate the hearts and minds of others, nor neglect science because faith can be found and restored in hard math, believe me.”

His eyes twinkled as he reached for another:

Boneman - Faith is a funny old thing, at it’s heart it is the principle that you believe in something that cannot be proved, but there is a darker side to it all as well, which as the young lad here shows us, sometime the line between man and deity may blur, to the point that the belief is no longer something that is a choice, it is something that is enforced.... Chilling indeed.”

He chuckled as if a little sadly, then reached up and wiped a tear from his eye. The strangest thing was the magical sparkle there did not diminish, and im moments the smile returned, “Ahhh

Mith - You know sometimes you writers can be a little too clever for your own good, and hit on something a little bit too close to the truth. I mean an inventive idea, that not only adds another level of reliability to a service, but eases pain from an old man’s heart? What better present eh? What a good story. Or is it a story?”

Santa shot a small look at his lead Reindeer and smiled knowingly,

BetaWolf - Of course there are always different types of faith. It is a kind of trust when the multitude believe in one single thing, but then there ios the inverted, where one can have a faith in many: to do the right thing. To be good. This is much the way I see things, you know, having faith in all the children to be good...”

He snapped his whip and the reindeer rose higher, their hooves silently galloping across the clouds, the big man reached once more into his sack, “Well would you look at that,

Martin321 - You know some stories are epic, giving you a nebulous answer, and this is one of them. People can on others trust and is that what we see here. A sharp con man convincing another to give up all his cash and then the remains disposed of in a nefarious scheme? You just have to trust that this is not the case and that the customer is indeed living in paradise. He probably is, one way or another....

“Hey ho, Rudolph, Dasher, Prancer, Blitzen, Dancer onwards!”

To be continued....
 
I'm not going to suspiciously disappear for coming to close to the truth am I? :O

Thank you for the review Perp, I have missed reading your comments :)
 
Thanks guys, now I've started I'll have to finish the comments for the month anyway ;)

But I'm going to have some fun....
 
Thanks guys, now I've started I'll have to finish the comments for the month anyway ;)

But I'm going to have some fun....

Alright! You've returned, awesome. :) And you've got a Santa suit on too.


Let's see.........Faith and Science Fiction. Hmm, nice combo.

I think I've got something. I better skim the other tales first to see if anyone else has the same idea.

(returned) No has the same idea. Now to fine tune my entry.
 
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Thanks Bowler & SB, it's a good feeling to see these responses. Makes me feel all warm and tingly inside :D

And you like Santa wait until part 2 ;)
 
Nothing yet, peeps. I'm feeling too down to start thinking on anything. Maybe tonight, if I'm lucky.


Good to see Perp going back to things. :) Maybe we'll get some of that stability back in the coming months. I do hope so.
 
Great theme! Springs, really well done!

Downside: Some people are going to think that I should really be set for this. Faith and Science Fiction? Two of my passions. Well, we'll have to see if anything comes of this for me.
 
There. Put out some tripe and decided to run with it. Not that I find anything wrong with it per se on its own; I'm only worried about it connecting to the theme in any more than the faintest of ways.
 
Great theme! Springs, really well done!

Downside: Some people are going to think that I should really be set for this. Faith and Science Fiction? Two of my passions. Well, we'll have to see if anything comes of this for me.

Thanks, Parson. :)

Yes, I've been wondering what you'll do with it, and looking forward to see it. No pressure. :D
 

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