Hi,
I just finished my first science fiction book and need help to correct some mistakes and a sincere opinion about the story.
I did all I could, but without readers help, feel I can't go any longer.
I'm posting in Wattpad.
A brief synopsis:
The Inner Rig Secret
Having lost it’s roots and all it’s cultural reference, a society travels seeking a new world to settle.
The group descended from a very small number of individuals, so they could not keep a stable population, then started the use of cloning to bring back their dead.
Everyone believes that every young child are the same person which was lost, they receive the same name, profession and treatment. Everyone writes a dairy so they can recover their memories in future lives, and then continue their work from they left off.
Upon receiving the diary of her previous life, Kalyn realizes that the information is quite difficult to understand, then starts a search on her own, to find out who she was, while chronicles her new daily experiences and learns along with the reader, how are the living inside a colossal spaceship. Many mysteries and exciting challenges presents in this wonderful story.
So how will Kalyn will react when finally find out who was and what did that person who in the past answered by her name?
Could not post the link... so ask inbox, okay? Or just search the title in Wattpad.com
That's it... Thanks a lot.