Death/Fantasy
Hex - First off is the sweet and funny tale of a young Death, on a prom date. You've conjured a very cute and humorous story. Fantastic writing as always.
Khayos - Excellent job of capturing the anger the main character feels toward everything, due to the loss of someone close. Nice to meet you.
Remedy - Marvelous poem that illustrates stark images of what happened after the King dies. Which of course, is witnessed by his son. Grimly good.
Springs - What if the characters we all write about had feelings and form? In this tale, it's highlighted like a high polished jewel. Well done.
Quellist - Firstly, nice to meet you. And second, I was taken back by your intense drama. I liked the fact that you showed that Death, is affected by tragedies he sees. Superb story.
Victoria Silverwolf - Outstanding tale of curiosity, and the Styx boatman of Death. Once again you've created a magnificant offering that both delights and enchants the reader.
Farntfar - Alright! A Dr Who episode, written by you. I was thrilled to read this fine story that entertained me thoroughly. No apologies are nessessary! I loved it.
Juliana - This is a wonderful story you've constructed, it makes me think of those black and white classic movies where they show that the afterlife is not much different from normal life. Very cool.
Alchemist - Mu-ha ha ha ha ha ha. You shook me to my funny bone with this one. First you grabbed my attention, then stunned me with racism, and clobbered me with humor. A tremendous treat.
Telford - Death's job isn't as easy as most of us think it is, and you've showcased that here masterfully. Just as us humans ask "why", the answer is usually simple and uncomfortable. Nicely done sir.
Bowler1 -
Mu-ha ha ha ha ha. A perfect title that sums up this dark chocolate treat of grim Death. Situated at (what Americans call) the Internal Revenue Service, but in another realm of course. Fantastic.
Martin321 - Another great bone-tickling tale. Terrific entry that make me chuckle. Which was stuffed with the nonsense of bureaucracy in the pit of the hellish underworld. Good stuff.
Teresa Edgerton - A superb spooky story that entertains well as a very grim fairy tale. Grand nightmare imagery of the dead princess, which reaps the familiarity of a "Cinderella-styled" zombie tale. Enchantingly dark.
Cat’s Cradle - Firstly, no apologies are nessessary for your first challenge submission. You wrote an exceptional dark fiction of the death of a warrior. And second, nice to meet you.