ArstenWhitebeard
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I am with Wert on this one. While interesting, the "now infamous" early synopsis cannot be used as a basis for the current storyline.
As for the 5 year gap, I understand why he originally wanted to include it, but I am very glad that he didn't, even if it did result in a slightly meandering plot for some characters, like Dany. He wanted to have the 5 year gap, as wert said, so that the characters could mature a bit and be more ready for coming events. And he decided against it because, basically, he thought of all the things that could happen in 5 years and it wouldn't have made sense to the story to have basically nothing happen in that time, or to have to flash back to things that we didn't see happen. not to mention having to re-describe all of the characters so we could get our heads around the changes that they were supposed to go through during the gap, like Arya becoming a cold-blooded(er) killer, or Jon having 5 years of experience as Lord Commander or as a ranger in the Night's watch. and what, Cersei was supposed to not mess up for a solid 5 years?
I'm going to make a Forum Faux-Pas and mention a series that isn't sci-fi or fantasy (I know, I know, the gall of it). But if anyone has read Ken Follet's books Pillars of the Earth or World without End, (they are like a 2 part series set 100 years apart). Each of those rather substantial books span an entire lifespan, with main characters starting off as children (9 or 10) and ending 30-40 years later, when they are parents and grand-parents. Throughout the books, there are time-jumps, where suddenly 4-6 years pass. Follet deals with these jumps in the story well, and both books are amazing (I really do recommend reading them), but while it makes sense for the story, it can be jarring for the reader, where suddenly we don't know the main characters anymore because they kept living their lives while we couldn't see. One minute a character is a teenaged boy in love with a girl from his village, the next he is married to another woman, has a kid and is living in Italy. Again, while I am a fan of Follet's books, I am glad Martin didn't jump ahead 5 years in his story, I don't think it would have worked for aSoIaF.
As for the 5 year gap, I understand why he originally wanted to include it, but I am very glad that he didn't, even if it did result in a slightly meandering plot for some characters, like Dany. He wanted to have the 5 year gap, as wert said, so that the characters could mature a bit and be more ready for coming events. And he decided against it because, basically, he thought of all the things that could happen in 5 years and it wouldn't have made sense to the story to have basically nothing happen in that time, or to have to flash back to things that we didn't see happen. not to mention having to re-describe all of the characters so we could get our heads around the changes that they were supposed to go through during the gap, like Arya becoming a cold-blooded(er) killer, or Jon having 5 years of experience as Lord Commander or as a ranger in the Night's watch. and what, Cersei was supposed to not mess up for a solid 5 years?
I'm going to make a Forum Faux-Pas and mention a series that isn't sci-fi or fantasy (I know, I know, the gall of it). But if anyone has read Ken Follet's books Pillars of the Earth or World without End, (they are like a 2 part series set 100 years apart). Each of those rather substantial books span an entire lifespan, with main characters starting off as children (9 or 10) and ending 30-40 years later, when they are parents and grand-parents. Throughout the books, there are time-jumps, where suddenly 4-6 years pass. Follet deals with these jumps in the story well, and both books are amazing (I really do recommend reading them), but while it makes sense for the story, it can be jarring for the reader, where suddenly we don't know the main characters anymore because they kept living their lives while we couldn't see. One minute a character is a teenaged boy in love with a girl from his village, the next he is married to another woman, has a kid and is living in Italy. Again, while I am a fan of Follet's books, I am glad Martin didn't jump ahead 5 years in his story, I don't think it would have worked for aSoIaF.