Discussion thread -- September 2015 75-word Writing Challenge

[farntfar]

Damn that gloating streak in me.
I dun lost again.

 

[Luiglin]

Damn that gloating streak in me.
I dun lost again.

Mwhuhahahahahahahahahaha

 

[farntfar]

There, you see. That's just favouritism.
You can Mwuahaha all you like, and nerry a word.
A couple of innocent little nyuks from me and WALLOP. No prize.

 

[Perpetual Man]

Well now I'm up and about I will put on my daddy hat and Luiglin can go into the Naughty Corner. This is normally for the number of minutes as years in your age.

No books, toys or IT mind.

 

[Glen]

Y

 

[Mr Orange]

Y

N

 

[Victoria Silverwolf]

PROGRAM CONTINUES

Item: Glen: With a touch of sardonic wit, the author shows us a future that is both different and strangely similar to our own.

Item: farntfar: By looking at the dangers of technology through the eyes of the past, this story offers a powerful lesson in what might have gone wrong.

Item: Droflet: This touching and heartfelt tale reminds us that human emotions do not change, even when other things do.

Item: Remedy: With profound emotion, this story of guilt and regret overwhelms the reader with its powerful message.

Item: Parson: This all-too-realistic account of the temptations and dangers of the unreal offers a note of hope.

Item: Vaz: With a nod to popular culture, this playful tale shows us that the mischief of childhood is always with us.

 

[Droflet]

As usual, Victoria, my heartfelt thanks.

 

[Vaz]

Thank you so much Victoria. As usual, wonderful reviews

 

[Victoria Silverwolf]

Item: willwallace: This exciting and suspenseful adventure carries a satiric sting in its tail.

 

[willwallace]

Adding my thanks to everyone else's in acknowledging Victoria's great reviews.

 

[Dan Jones]

I'm in, after sitting on my entry for a couple of days. Alas, I couldn't squeeze in the Tudorpunk, or the dinosaurs, but it'll just have to do.

Good entries so far.

And Will, you're a very bad boy

 

[Glen]

Thanks for the reviews Victoria and Tim.

 

[Mr Orange]

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[Victoria Silverwolf]

Item: DG Jones: The hardboiled style of this compelling story of sacrifice strengthens its emotional impact.

Item: Mr Orange: With rapier-like wit the author conceals a surprise for the reader in this clever tale.

 

[Victoria Silverwolf]

Item: Ihe: With insight and compassion the author allows us to feel the struggles of one who does not fit into society's norms.

 

[Mr Orange]

Item: Mr Orange: With rapier-like wit the author conceals a surprise for the reader in this clever tale.

many thanks @Victoria Silverwolf i'll happily take "rapier-like wit"

 

[Dan Jones]

Thanks Victoria, as always!

@Mr Orange surely your story should be filed under Kormapunk?

 

[Mr Orange]

Thanks Victoria, as always!

@Mr Orange surely your story should be filed under Kormapunk?

ha! or cyberpun(k)jabi

 

[Dan Jones]

Or Cybiryani. Punk.