Fun Haiku

[Erin99]

Your haiku, dear Ben
Is scarily similar
To my six word tale.

And I never saw it beforehand either!

 

[ice.monkey]

hand shakes and leg jogs
heart races and eyes won't close
way too much coffee

 

[Pyan]

Saturday morning
Why do I feel so happy?
Two weeks holiday!

 

[ice.monkey]

the kill-joy enters
be over before you know
and back to the grind

 

[Pyan]

But view'd from this point
in time, they stretch before me,
like the ocean's shore....

 

[HardScienceFan]

holidays,sojourning,
leisurely spending time,cor,
joy,stonking,right gov?

PS you are allowed to shoot me

 

[ice.monkey]

the hammer cocks; click
takes good aim at h s f
squeezes the trigger

 

[Harpo]

My band tomorrow
Have never met each other.
It's gonna be fun.

 

[Talysia]

The sea greets the shore.
Familiar, yet never
Staying together.

 

[ice.monkey]

a brand new day dawns
oppressive heaven threatens
but I laugh at it

 

[Grimblade]

Death is a precipice
The wind we can easily resist
Life gives the push

 

[HardScienceFan]

good one ,grim

 

[Erin99]

Yes, I like, Grim!


A place of solace
A place to hide from the world
A place place where dreams exist.

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I am standing here
In a wilderness of grey
It feels so lonely.

 

[ice.monkey]

A place place where dreams exist.

what is a place place?
a place that's within a place?
or it exists twice?

 

[Grimblade]

Cheers. I like the first one from your last post, Leisha.

Blood on my hands
A story lost in rage
There's no honour in this

 

[HardScienceFan]

still good
i like
the newbie grimblade
shows poetic acolytes
the path,way to go


and you're allowed to shoot me for this one

 

[Erin99]

what is a place place?
a place that's within a place?
or it exists twice?

It was very late
I was far beyond tired
But I couldn't leave!



And that's my excuse!

 

[HardScienceFan]

Leish is forgiven
her mastery of the art
suffered from lack of sleep

 

[Talysia]

Leaves fall from the trees.
A swathe of reds, golds, and browns.
Summer is ending.

 

[Erin99]

Sunshine and daisies
The world looks bearable now
Life is not so grey.