Creative rhyming

"so give me a Redbull and I'll get wired"
but his Lordship was gone, leaving nowt in his place.

(another muso here)
 
there's a definite beat, but no melody

so raise your voices and stamp your feet
 
And let's go dancing in the street

Like in that programme, you know the one, Fame!


(Nice save, Url :applauding smiley:))
 
And Zubi did rock and was right glad he came

equipped with his amp but then a speaker blew
 
A red and gold figure with a certain propensity

for walking on the edge of clock towers
 
with his measured paces counting the hours

and his head for heights a definite bonus
 
Whether 'tis a crack, or rivet, or flange

He steps across them with the greatest of ease
 
except for that time with the slippery tile

but we'll overlook that and place blame on the weather
 
Distracted him from the falling boulder

So to avoid the crush he took flight
 
This mud must be a punishment from hell.



Earthquakes shake the ground I walk on,
 
From the air come tumbling pylons

And lodge themselves in the punishing mud
 
And the mud that splashed on the giant clock

Dripped slowly down with a trickling ooze
 
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