First off, thank you to everyone who has mentioned my story as a choice, a shortlist, or indeed just as a passing fancy. In the company of forty-odd pieces of prose that are generally excellent and sometimes exceptional, I'm amazed that I could produce something that others feel is on par.
To quote Mukodono, "even if there is only one person who is touched by my work, then it's worth doing".
As for voting this month, it was a tough choice. I loved chopper's lyrical word choice, "Away, and below the system ecliptic."; I liked the unrepentant confessional of Mouse's fairy tale character; I liked the simple declarative style of HJ's entry.
In the end I chose Harebrain's story. The characterisation of the narrator is so neatly done; the way his ambition overreaches itself, even at his most perilous moment. Well done!