Perp - Thank you for your comment, I did and do want to write more into this story, i think it will be my pet project for the next few weeks. I wanted to show the process of torture and give a feel to it that people could relate to. I finished it this way to show how although they had gone through all this work, all they had successfully gained was a forced and false confession, he hadn't done anything and they had taken the wrong man. However i do not think i'll be able to post the final piece for critique because of the content. If anyone would be interested I will let people know when i'm finished and then PM it to them. I would love it if anyone would then take the time to look over it.
Chrons Members - For anyone who read my story this month and thought it was too graphic I apologise. I did not mean to cause any problems and in all honesty did not realise it would be seen that way, I just got caught up in the writing. If the moderators see it as a problem they are more than welcome to take it off. I don't want anyone seeing it that shouldn't and being affected by it. In future I shall endeavour not to do this again. Sorry.
On a lighter note, there are some wonderful stories here, and some of them are very dark. I was a little concerned by the themes in the stories. Lots of suicide which i dont usually like to read about but the writing was excellent! And one story that doesn't need the theme mentioning when you consider that fact i have two small children, that was very dark and powerful. I loved the twist for his punishment but felt the pain instantly at the thought of it.
Perhaps next month we can have a theme based on flowers, ponies and candy floss!!!
Well its more like a drinks warehouse really. I should cut down.
