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Hey Marvin.

I enjoy most robot stories, but not everything. I'm probably one of the few people who didn't get into Robotech or the Transformers. I'm more of a classic robot fan, like B9 from Lost in Space. But I do like good deal of today's robots from anime series Bubblegum Crisis, and droids from Star Wars (for examples).


Have you seen Satan's Robot in ST:Voyager? Makes me chuckle every time I see it.
 
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Howdy,
I have just put my story in the circular file, I read back a few pages on this forum and discovered that Chris has not had his operation yet. I wonder if remembering that he had a date with a robot had inspired my story (I'm sure it must have), anyway I already have another idea and will have to get to work on it.
Chris, sometimes the waiting is one of the worst parts.
Bob S.
 
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Have you seen Satan's Robot in ST:Voyager? Makes me chuckle every time I see it.

I checked it out on Youtube. That episode looks so retro cool, they used the robot design from the 1930's serial Undersea Kingdom. I've only seen a handful of episodes from S.T.Voyager and the same goes for the Undersea Kingdom.

Oh man, I've got to see that Voyager episode! :D Thanks Paranoid Marvin.

And yes, I could thrown in a ton of robots in the 300 Word Challenge.....heh heh...
 
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01000011 01101000 01110010 01101001 01110011 01110100 01101001 01100001 01101110 00100000 01001110 01100001 01110011 01101000 00001101 00001010 (Christian Nash) – I rather liked this one, reminding me of something I wrote years ago – only this is better. The idea of a machine attaining freewill, coupled with knowing the difference between right and wrong is something that is a major undercurrent in the story. A solid reminder not to kick the vacuum cleaner...

01001101 01101111 01110011 01100001 01101001 01111000 (Mosaix) – Took him on one side eh? What side would that be, the dark side? I enjoyed this one, but felt as though I was missing something – possibly trying to over complicate things. I really loved the opening imagery of robot parts spread across a galaxy – I could just see it in my mind. And there is a sense of foreboding in that final line.

01000100 01100001 01100101 01110100 01101000 01100110 01110010 01101111 01101101 01101101 01100001 01110011 01110011 01101001 01110110 01100101 (Deathfrommassive) – What a cracking story, not so good if you are a member of the chronicles, I guess. Well I’m sure there are plenty here who will stand up to the assault from the bot... hello? Anybody? A great tale, good idea and overall fun.
 
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01000011 01101000 01110010 01101001 01110011 01110100 01101001 01100001 01101110 00100000 01001110 01100001 01110011 01101000 00001101 00001010 (Christian Nash) – I rather liked this one, reminding me of something I wrote years ago – only this is better. The idea of a machine attaining freewill, coupled with knowing the difference between right and wrong is something that is a major undercurrent in the story. A solid reminder not to kick the vacuum cleaner...

Thanks man, I put more effort into this one than the others and as I don't read or write sf had to look up some themes.

The first thing was the name, Da Vinci, I named the robot after the inventer as I think he first came up with the first automata theories.

Secondly, he calls himself autonomous and then backs it up in reference to his own words when he tells us that he makes his own laws at the end...

You have what's right and wrong, but you also have what suits and what doesn't. If you push someone, something, it's either going to break or push back.
 
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Nice one Moonbat. Very nice ...

Thanks RJM, :)

I've been trying to write something like this for a long time, my 1000th post critique was almost a piece called Moon.bat but I just couldn't get the balance of technical details to story right, this time I hope I've managed to portray a story in the style of a program.
 
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Moonbat: Very clever and inventive, I like it.

Pyan: My favourite so far, very punny!
 
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*Groans loudly*

Pyan, you have been mixing with Ursa far too much!
 
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Sorry, but I thought that a change from all the weltuntergangsszenarien would be pleasant...


That's not an Octopus you have for an avatar is it...Paul?
 
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01110011 01101100 01100001 01100011 01101011 (Slack) - A rather grim entry, that worked in so many different ways I find it hard to decide which interpretation of the story I like best. Was the protagonist human or machine? Was the tall machine at the start a robotic veteran? Nothing really matters, just the danger at following dreams inspired by stories of others, that reality is not always what we would want it to be.

01001000 01101001 01100111 01101000 01101100 01100001 01101110 01100100 01100101 01110010 (Highlander) - Is this a sign of the future? Children graced with pets that are so much more than pets, machines in the form of animals? A constant companion, a guardian, a friend - one that will never grow old, get ill or die. Perhaps in some ways a boon, but in others I'm not so sure. A good solid story.

01010010 01001010 01001101 00100000 01000011 01101111 01110010 01100010 01100101 01110100 (RJM Corbet) - A fun tale, that seems wistful to start with, almost idyllic as the little robot slips down a river in his boat and then takes a turn. I think what makes it work so well is the ending, and makes you want to know, just what IS that little robot that dealing with two bullies should be so nonchalant with its dismissal.

01100011 01101000 01110010 01101001 01110011 01110000 01100101 01101110 01111001 01100011 01100001 01110100 01100101 (Chris) - There he is a brain the size of a planet, and he's dragged headlong into a small writing contest, not even a big one.... Ahh Marvin, one of the great SF robotic characters, and Chris nails him perfectly. Not only that but the poem was well constructed, as always, but it was intelligent, fun and nostalgic rolled into one. (Now I've got the old songs released by the Paranoid Android running through my head)
 
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Re: Pyan's entry.

Well we know where Ursa's vote is going... :D
 
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It's tough for me to decide which is the best of the bunch, a lot of good tales.
 
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Moonbat's story reminds me of the strip that xkcd webcomic did on the Mars Rover. Anyone read it? Genuinely quite moving and sad! Poor little Mars Rover...
 
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Re: Pyan's entry.

Well we know where Ursa's vote is going... :D
I may have to discount your suggestion; after all, if you were to be correct in your assumption, my vote would be being cast for cache and carry on computing....
 
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I may have to discount your suggestion; after all, if you were to be correct in your assumption, my vote would be being cast for cache and carry on computing....


There's no need to dismiss his post wholesale though.
 
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:D

You're right: it would be wrong to shelve the idea, but I don't want to stack the odds in favour of one entry when there'll be many more to checkout before I cast my vote.

(Sounds like I'll have to bear it in mind, though....)
 
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