DISCUSSION THREAD -- December 2012 75-word Writing Challenge

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TSP, that's hilarious. Yet again, another great entry lands. My short list is becoming as long as my list for Santa. :eek:

Teresa, I'm sure you'll think of something. You have a knack of always conjuring up something wonderful, so I doubt we'll have to wait long for a mini-masterpiece to appear.

Saying that, the anticipation is killing me, so hurry up! :D
 
Thanks! I hope I will come up with something. I didn't write anything in October or November, so at least coming up with an idea I have to discard is progress.
 
decided to go with the more humorous song, since it had the most coherent story in it.
 
This is great, I've got the opportunity to comment as the new posts arrive, and I'm keeping up with everyone as they add their tales. Yippy-Coyote! :D

The Spurring Platty - I knew someone was going to use that Teefer tune and create an entry out of it. And you did a great job with vampire jr, cute little sucker.

Hopewrites - I did a double-take when I saw the title. :eek: "What the?" Then I sang the familiar holiday song with updated apocalyptical lyrics. Very merrily funny and wonderful.
 
*giggle* thanks Starbeast. When the voting is done I might post the other song I did... Carol of the Bells.
 
Lola – This was another of those stories that I felt I could take in more than way, which makes it all the richer. It also offers a different take on the vampire, one that is a blood drinker against her will rather than as a monster of the night. The conclusion where she is finally freed might be the freedom of death, or is she actually being let free? Excellent

J Riff – The first thing that hit me about this one was the incredible creativity behind the names, Fangette particularly was an immediate favourite. It gives a different view of the vampires at the festive season, and their never-ending gifts of blood. Amusing, creative and with a perfect punchline another cracker.

Parson – I thought this was good when I first read it, but upon a second reading I realised just how outstanding it. Beautiful almost in giving a twist on the vampire, where redemption is available even for such a creature, a miracle coming from its choice of victim. The use of words and the meaning that comes with them, the wordplay is simply incredible. Life a single malt, this is one to be savoured.

TheTomG – Well, a totally different take on Father Christmas, one that feels like an uncovered myth, something from the past that unveils a forgotten truth. There is almost a sympathetic edge to it, a sacrifice made, becoming a bloodsucker in order to bring join to billions. Just a life a year in return. Is it worth it? Another wonderful entry.

Warren – There may well be a feeling of loss, as a vampire mourns his mortal life, but does that mean Father Christmas will not visit? Well from the story here I can only hope not, because it seems this particular bloodsucker is determined to strip others of the joys that he has lost, and only death waits the jolly one. Unless of course it is the Santa from the previous story....
 
Still can't think of any way in which dragons can be brought into this...and considering how I decided that I would challenge myself to get dragons into every 75 word challenge and into 300s if possible I am failing most miserably! Thinking cap still on and still short circuiting :p
 
Vampire dragons! When they bite, you know about it. ;)

or

Dragon Eggs, not just Hagrid's perfect Christmas gift. :D

Just ideas to warm up the thinking cap.
 
Ooops! Please ignore the naughty Overlord effectively posting a second story (that also exceeded the word limit).

I'll wait until voting is over.

Let me just say that vampires and dragons can go into 75 words (if I cut just a couple more words out).
 
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Thank you Perpetual Man for the feedback! Always good to hear what folks thought of the writing. I'll do a run through on my favorites, but once all the entries are in :)
 
Parson – I thought this was good when I first read it, but upon a second reading I realised just how outstanding it. Beautiful almost in giving a twist on the vampire, where redemption is available even for such a creature, a miracle coming from its choice of victim. The use of words and the meaning that comes with them, the wordplay is simply incredible. Life a single malt, this is one to be savoured.

High praise! Thank you so much for the kind words Perp. You always seem to catch what I am headed for.

Hopewrites: Now see here young lady.... (Aw, Parson just can't get his tongue to do a proper lashing.) But Zombie Jesus does sound like a bad punk band title to me. :p
 
Ooops! Please ignore the naughty Overlord effectively posting a second story (that also exceeded the word limit).

I'll wait until voting is over.

Let me just say that vampires and dragons can go into 75 words (if I cut just a couple more words out).

I posted one word over the limit myself once. Fortunately, the mistake was noticed while I was still exploring this site. I raced back to my entry and deleted my mistake quickly before the post locked.

Man-a-live, I tell you, I was in a panic :rolleyes: sheesh.


Moonbat - You have written a tale which is (what I think) a true story. Evil vampire CEOs sucking money out of us humans. A magnificently horrifing story.

David Evil Overlord - A monsterouly wonderful sci-fi tale which I would love to see made into a spooky vampire movie!
 
High praise! Thank you so much for the kind words Perp. You always seem to catch what I am headed for.

Hopewrites: Now see here young lady.... (Aw, Parson just can't get his tongue to do a proper lashing.) But Zombie Jesus does sound like a bad punk band title to me. :p

The irreverence of it is (I hope) forgivabe. Doesn't quite fit in the category of "calling a spade a shovel" but the truth hidden in the misnomer caught me as funny the first time I heard it.
Hopefully its as forgivable as picturing Him in a smoky lounge, glowing, next to a drunk pianist with Brahms Stoker style vampires snapping a "doo-wap" behind him. That's probably taking Him too much at His word when He said you could find Him anywhere.
 
Hmmm a small draconic christmas vampiric thing is swirling in my head...at the moment i have a scenario...no characters, no dialogue, no action...I shall ponder some more...doubtful if I will gather any votes with it, but it amuses me, so I'm hoping it turns into something useable...


p.s. I jumped on the bandwagon and Christmassed up my avatar :wink:
 
Kylara - glad things are swirling...

..after all, there'd have been no Dracula without first having a draco, so it seems only proper that we have dragons in this challenge!:)
 
Lola – This was another of those stories that I felt I could take in more than way, which makes it all the richer. It also offers a different take on the vampire, one that is a blood drinker against her will rather than as a monster of the night. The conclusion where she is finally freed might be the freedom of death, or is she actually being let free? Excellent

You have my sincerest thanks, , Perp. *bows*
 
Warren – There may well be a feeling of loss, as a vampire mourns his mortal life, but does that mean Father Christmas will not visit? Well from the story here I can only hope not, because it seems this particular bloodsucker is determined to strip others of the joys that he has lost, and only death waits the jolly one. Unless of course it is the Santa from the previous story....

Thanks for the review, Perp.


Interversus - that is hilarious. Getting a DUI ticket for drinking blood.
 
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