Discussion -- 300 Word Challenge #8

I've been finding it really hard to structure my entry this month. I had my idea very early on but trying to extract the story has been like pulling teeth. I'm still on my first draft for (literally) crying out loud!

Anyway, hoping to finish the first draft today and then edit in time for close-off.

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I finally had an idea, while I was posting on the "Last Post In This Thread Wins" thread. My unposted reply became a 75-word story, which then grew into the 300-word story I've posted for this challenge.

Hopefully, no-one else has already posted a similar story -- I haven't read any others yet, so I don't steal ideas or curse that mine have been stolen before I even wrote them. :)

EDIT: Thank you, Victoria Silverwolf. :)
 
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juelz4sure: Uses a high fantasy setting to tell a moody, somber story.

thank you Victoria for the comment, I've been trying to stay away from somber stories but I always seem to revert back. I'm glad you liked it though (I hope :D).

Juelz4sure - A fantastic tale of legendary history told by an elderly man, about an epic Orc War. This is like a missing chapter from the Lord of the Rings, I love it. Vrall Lives!


Wow thank you for this review, It possible is the nicest thing anyone's said about my writings. To be compared to the Lord of the Rings is very humbling and exciting at the same time. I really like and appreciate your comment.
 
Thanks, Starbeast! :D

You're welcome Mouse.

@Starbeast, ooh, you drive a hard bargain. :)

Don't celebrate until the check clears. :D

Thank ye kindly Starbeast :)

Aye, twas a fun read Allmywires.

Wow thank you for this review, It possible is the nicest thing anyone's said about my writings. To be compared to the Lord of the Rings is very humbling and exciting at the same time. I really like and appreciate your comment.

You are emensely welcomed. Keep up the good work.



Perpetual Man - That was beautiful, I felt like you were discribing a real intergalactic creature. I could see it floating through the cosmos, and I felt sad when you discribed a dead one. But you explained that even the bones resonated with a lively energy. What a wonderful animal, with a beautiful name.

Juliana - A dream fantasy turns into the reality of a romantic encounter, such a sweet tale. You made me smile and sigh with a glowing heart at this magnificent story. (sigh) Sweet romance.

Stormcrow - Excellent tale about a writer of sci-fi pleasing the masses, but knowing there are others amoung us. And before he is met with the mysterious Men in Black, he becomes more than a human ascending into the realm of...the OTHERS. Excellent!

Warren Paul - A grim tale of an eerie curse thrust upon a seaman to forever see as he stands at the shore looking at the wreakage of a ship that brings him back to the fateful day that damned him. Marvelously written and eerily haunting tale.

Abernovo - Interesting story you have here, something I didn't expect, and that's what elevates your tale. You got me involved and wanting more. This reads like the beginning of a great saga, an adventure that goes far beyond our Earth.

Blacula - Quite a narrative tale described by a ghost speaking about a rusted giant. This story goes into great poetic detail and a sad vanishing history of the rotting hulk. You left me speechless.
 
Thank you, Starbeast. Your review made my morning. :)
 
Scott – What a terrible, chilling tale that is as surely brilliant as it is disturbing. We are led to believe that a man and woman had survived a shipwreck, husband and wife, and learn as the story progresses how terrible the disaster was, and that all other hands were lost, yet we never think about the coincidence that of an entire crew died, yet husband and wife survived. The protagonist even tells us that she is what is keeping him sane, but it is only when we reach the end that we come to realise his mind is as wrecked as the ship, turning the story around, casting it in a different light and making us feel the chill touch us, as surely as the winds did him.

Victoria – This is one of those stories that I enjoyed immensely, but I’m not sure whether my interpretation might meet that of the writer. One of the things I particularly appreciated though was the different use of the image. Here not a physical thing, but part of an imaginary sequence that is being used to help Carla get through the pain of the night. The rest of the story sees a woman being treated for a disease, being given hope of a longer life. Like so many things it is not an easy cure, but it is a cure. But she seems not so interested in the benefits but in the pain, giving her a connection with someone who died before, and perhaps did not have the luxury of a modern ‘miracle.’

Lenny – How terrible is the soul of a tormented artist? Well probably a lot worse when that artist is unappreciated too. There is a feeling that the first success might almost have been a mistake, as though it was something that was done but not really expecting it to be a success, but cleverly there is just the hint that there might be more to the sudden success. The sequel as it were is equally clever, you can see the artist trying to cash in on his sudden success and misunderstanding what the original achieved and why it did it, and then the third the masterpiece, taking to story into the realm of pure fantasy. And the payoff... it does not matter how great the achievement, a faustian deal will always come home in the end.

DEO – Talk about a story that can be seen on many different levels! This seemed to have sucked in so many different elements that it is hard to catalogue them all. Not only is there the obvious vicious attack on certain prodigious fast food establishments, there is also some very inventive food stuffs, a great take on classic fantasy tropes, some topical news interwoven with a hint of roleplaying games, and the terrifying possibilities of lawyers with dark magic. Oh and a little bit of humour too. But the truly clever bit is the fact that all these elements come together and work in a cohesive whole, without being overcrowded and deliver an entertaining story.
 
StarBeast - Thank You for that review! I'm delighted you got all that from it!
 
Thank you, Starbeast. Your review made my morning. :)

You're welcome Abernovo. It makes me happy to brighten someone elses day.

Thanks, Starbeast. Always interesting to read the reviews and see the different perspectives people have.

True. I look forward to the reviews of others. Keep up the good work.


Idiot Prince - The ship called Moreander crashed ashore joining other wrecks, and the sole survivor is fortunate to live. But, just as he begins to settle himself, he is met by an elven inhabitant who seems to view the seaman as an unwanted trespasser. Great fantasy, leaving me wanting more.

Scott R. Forshaw - Marooned on an island after the ship wreck of the Orcan Queen, Samuel tries to make the most of it. Meanwhile Hannah, the woman he loves, is comforted by him, even though she is dead. A sad romantic tragedy of a man refusing to let go of his beloved. Excellent drama.

Victoria Silverwolf - A treatment worth the suffering, postponing death a little longer, wow, I didn't expect this one. You weaved a mighty sci-fi story of dramatic hope. Very intense subject matter you have chosen, and you wrote it so well. I like this tale you've written, it stunned me.

Lenny - Fantastic science fiction fantasy about a painter who wanted fame, and the incredible way he achieved it. Very cool man! Being an artist myself, your story sparked my interest emensely. Great stuff!

David Evil Overlord - After I read the title, I thought your tale was going to be a horror story, man-alive, was I mistaken! You pumped out an exceedingly funny story that made me laugh. McDarkElf, that's a good one.


You're welcome Stormcrow, I really enjoyed your story.
 

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