Lafayette
Man of Artistic Fingers
I am re-writing and almost going into a different direction on Chapter 7. It occurred to me after reading it again that I left a major item unexplained to my readers giving them a wishy-washy statement of 'for some unknown reason'. The more I thought about it it dawned on me, that I was taking the lazy way out of giving reasonable statements of why certain events had transpired.
The downside to this is I took out some ideas I like and a verse I am particularly fond of. Now I am half trying to figure out a way to use these ideas later on. Maybe I have some material for another story.
It's a good thing I like writing or I'd be pee ohed.
The downside to this is I took out some ideas I like and a verse I am particularly fond of. Now I am half trying to figure out a way to use these ideas later on. Maybe I have some material for another story.
It's a good thing I like writing or I'd be pee ohed.