DISCUSSION -- October 2015 300-word Writing Challenge (#19)

Ive had mine written for a few days,but I still need to tinker to make sure I've chosen the best words for the right paces. It's not quite the story I was planning, and there is something powerful that I havent quite hit on (something which took actual Elizabethan genius to get right in one of my story's influences). But that means I can keep the idea to recycle at a later time :)

it's a strange one for me this time. For the first time I feel like the word limit has/is hampering the story I want to tell in both challenges this month(n)
 
farntfar -- This story delights the reader with its fond pastiche of good old sense of wonder from the Golden Age of science fiction adventure. The author also makes use of subtle clues and relentless logic to build to a surprising conclusion.

Droflet -- In this tense, suspenseful drama of survival in a hostile environment the author carefully creates believable characters. In this way the emotional impact of the denouement is greatly intensified.

Glen -- In this subtle and intricately constructed account of a strange future dystopia, the use of a classic example of popular culture from our own time serves as an indication that there is more here than meets the eye. This cautionary tale warns us of the consequences of certain trends in the modern world.

Ashleyne. B. Watts -- This highly original and imaginative story makes use of a shocking contrast between what should be a comforting, familiar small pleasure and horrific experiences almost beyond imagining. The calm, self-assured demeanor of the narrator adds to the frightening power of this chilling tale.

Cat's Cradle -- With a perfect grasp of the elegant style of one of the giants of fantastic literature, the author treats the reader to a rollicking parody of pulp fiction. Material that might have been in questionable taste in less sure hands becomes completely inoffensive because of the light touch and wit brought to it.

Tim James -- In this realistic and entirely convincing hard science fiction story, the way in which accurate scientific facts are combined with plausible extrapolation results in an awe-inspiring conclusion. The author also provides a gently poignant touch of emotion, engaging the reader's heart as well as her mind.

Juliana -- William Faulkner said that the only thing worth writing about was the human heart in conflict with itself. This dictum is applied with great skill in this richly imagined yet intimate fantasy story, in which the eternal problem of choosing among evils is presented with powerful images.

J D Foster -- A perfect balance of futuristic concepts and eternal human truths is found in this complex, fast-moving tale. By combining these elements, the author reminds us that the worlds inside us are as mysterious and deadly as the worlds outside.
 
Thank you so much for the very nice, and forgiving review, Victoria. I had considered an open note to reviewers saying I'd be fine if any preferred not to review the story; but I am very grateful for your insight and understanding, CC

edit--I've just read your own story, Victoria, and it's stunning! Wonderfully written, of course, but with a beautiful, absolutely believable/plausible (and fascinating) concept at its core. There's real tension here. And wow, a killer of a last line! Terrific!
 
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Thank you Victoria, for your lovely review.
Also for your kind words, J D F and Cat's.
 
I thought I better jump in with a huge thank you to Victoria for the magnificent review.

I honestly don't know how she does it.
 
The original story I had planned didn't turn out to be what I wrote. Funny how that happens.

Glad I got mine in though, now I can read everyone else's stories and enjoy the impossible pastime of wishing I had written something half as good :coffee:
 
I hacked off the first 800+ words of beautiful prose, scene setting and character back story. Coming in at 296, I managed to upload something. Mopey face.
 
HazelRah -- With great empathy the author creates a completely new and original character with whom the reader can sympathize. By showing us this character's perceptions, both wiser and more naive than our own, we are drawn into the soul of another being.

Denise Tanaka -- This intense and fascinating tale brings an exotic setting to life through the use of vivid details. As we experience the danger and wonder of this place through the senses of the protagonist, we come to understand the importance of communication.
 
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HazelRah said:
The original story I had planned didn't turn out to be what I wrote. Funny how that happens.

Glad I got mine in though, now I can read everyone else's stories and enjoy the impossible pastime of wishing I had written something half as good :coffee:
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I really love the bit about cleaning energy panels, it's so touching and sweet.
 
LittleStar -- The haunting rhythm of this epic poem draws the reader into its spell. By creating this sense of a ritual continuing through time, we are able to experience the entire life of a complex, heroic character.

DG Jones -- A powerful combination of techniques inspired by tales of the Old West and cinematic spectacles seems to provide the breakneck pace of this story. By making use of these skills, the author succeeds in creating a myth for the modern age.
 
It wasn't until yesterday when I had an idea that came to light. Quickly I formed a complete story in my mind and wrote it out this morning. Throughout the day I smoothed out the rough edges, and finally tonight I posted it.

With the usual paranoia, I took a fast glance at what was submitted already, before I posted. I'm looking forward to reading everyone else's tale.

I can't believe I made it on the first page.
 
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