DISCUSSION -- October 2015 300-word Writing Challenge (#19)

[Victoria Silverwolf]

Starbeast -- With a sure hand, the author makes use of seemingly unrelated themes from popular culture and blends them into a seamless whole. Add to this skill a sparkling sense of humor and you have a jeu d'esprit sure to delight the reader.

 

[Starbeast]

Thank you Lady Victoria Silverwolf for your wonderful review on me (and on the others).

 

[Mr Orange]

well i got something. not quite ready for posting. need to let in simmer then have another look at it when educating cardiff is being played in the same room...


and welcome back SB!

 

[Dan Jones]

DG, Victoria is so right about the pace of your story. I read it on the edge of my seat, desperate to know how it would then out!

Thanks JD! I only hope it turned out ok

 

[Denise Tanaka]

Victoria, you are truly gifted in writing the quick-review promo blurbs!

 

[Starbeast]

and welcome back SB!

It's good to be back Mr Orange. Take your time with your story, never rush.

 

[Mr Orange]

It's good to be back Mr Orange. Take your time with your story, never rush.

willdo. i found out last night i cannot concentrate properly when there are people speaking in welsh accents in the background.

 

[Droflet]

Taffy allergy?

 

[J D Foster]

Thanks JD! I only hope it turned out ok

Spot on, I didn't see the ending coming at all, I was expecting something different. (your ending was better, chuckle)

 

[Vaz]

Well I'm in. First idea I had and I really wanted to do a dragon story. Oh well, strike while the iron is hot so they say!

 

[Bowler1]

I'm almost ready, just a little more time to compress my idea into a bright shining diamond. Time to check out the competition so far.


It's official, I hate you all!

 

[Juliana]

It's official, I hate you all!

I would answer back to that but... I make a habit of not arguing with ray-gun-based entities. It's better for my health.

 

[Victoria Silverwolf]

Vaz -- In this high fantasy adventure the reader is swept along by vivid descriptions and a breathless pace. Along with this excitement we have a glimpse into the relationship between two characters bound in a unique way.

 

[Vaz]

Thank you for the beautiful review Victoria. Wonderful as always

 

[Victoria Silverwolf]

Travis Woodward -- Here we are given a thrilling vision of the future, in which humanity faces new challenges, resulting in new triumphs and new tragedies. By presenting two narratives separated in time, the author provides us with a strong sense of how one generation may view the achievements of another.

 

[J D Foster]

Travis Woodward I love the ending so much, Keria remembering the sacrifice, and the child couldn't care less, I love that, I can feel Keria's pain.

 

[Victoria Silverwolf]

willwallace -- In this emotionally powerful tale of a mysterious menace and a desperate fight for life, we find a deeper meaning. By presenting the reader with a mystical vision of what might lie behind the veil of reality, the author ponders profound philosophical concepts.

 

[willwallace]

Ah my, what a lovely review, Victoria. Thanks very much

 

[Victoria Silverwolf]

TitaniumTi -- By making use of multiple quick images of very different scenes, leaving transitions to the imagination of the reader, the author is able to create a story which evokes a whirlwind of various moods. From wryly comic fantasy to bleak realism to a final inspiring vision, this tale provides a large number of experiences in a few words.

 

[Travis Woodward]

Thank you for the lovely review Victoria, and for the kind words J D Foster