DISCUSSION -- October 2016 300-word Writing Challenge (#23)

Another top month for stories, and here are my top picks.

Starbeast: a madcap, irreverent Mel Brooks-esque yomp through the dulled yet melancholy mind of The Monster, as he faces off with his returning nemesis, presumably his creator, reduced to insanely babbling the name of a vaguely political 90s beat combo. My type of crazy.

Droflet: very clever piece of circular logic showing the shards of the time traveller's identity, fragmented into as many pieces as the broken places he visits, until at last he's faced with an unrecognisable self, the traveller given unlimited freedoms doomed to spend those freedoms eternally caged.

Cathbad: a good old fashioned ghost story with plenty of spook and weird goings-on, probably enough to warrant the world being expanded to a short story.

Cory Swanson: a forking good tale packed with surreal imagery and bizarre non-seqiturs at every turn, just where I like 'em. This story is a cut above the rest.

Glen: what starts off as a quirky, gnomish little tale reveals hidden layers and depths, as a seemingly cantankerous old git hides unseeming benevolence well, but when the killer punchline is revealed, we're left wondering if the benevolence and malevolence are one and the same. A thought-provoking piece.

Robert Mackay: as usual, a hugely immersive piece, filled with the sort of childhood details - the graze of a knee, the colour of a door - that add up to more than the sum of their parts and make the reader realise the significance of their seeming insignificance through their vividity. Carries a strong Spielberg flavour of children's secrets and the danger of the other, grown-up world.

Mr Orange: a spiritual successor to Lewis Carroll's Jabberwocky, filled with grotesque details, macabre delights and the threat that it just might be lurking under the bed... that typifies the best of children's literature.

The Judge: always worth terning off to visit to Merlin's Mage School. By the end I was puffin my cheeks out at the gull with which TJ applies her pun(guin)s. Some might say it's absolute bushtit, but for me she always shrikes the right note.

Some quackin... sorry, I'll stop now. Some cracking stories in there, but three albatrosses soared higher than the rest for me, and these were.....

Starbeast
Cory Swanson
Robert Mackay
 
Just a reminder for those who have not yet voted:

The poll closes at midnight tonight, i.e. there are just over 13 hours left in which to vote.​
 
Thank you Starbeast, Farntfar, Perp and Little Star for the mentions.

Thank you Wruter for the mention and some feedback. I feel the same way. All of my contest entries are extensions of a massive novel series (that I think you've seen) that is in the very infant stages.

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The first part of the story was very connected to the novel, the second half was kind of coerced to fit in with the image; so it's clear where and why it fell a bit flat. Ultimately these challenges give me a fun way to interact with peers and explore my universe whilst creating some finished products. Vote getting isn't the main goal, but its always nice!

Anyway, I voted for:
Wruter
JohnnyJet
Astrozon

Wife just gave birth. So I'm having trouble finding time to properly compile a shortlist.
 
Wife just gave birth. So I'm having trouble finding time to properly compile a shortlist.

I think if anything qualifies as a legitimate excuse for not compiling a shortlist, that would probably be one of the best. Congratulations! Hope it all went well and that everyone is healthy.
 
A quick shortlist:

Cat's Cradle -- The Dimensions Vary
DG Jones -- Dada Daddy-O
farntfar -- On living flesh
HazelRah -- Detached
mosaix -- In Two Minds?
Robert Mackay -- Between
Vaz -- The Watcher & The Night Walker
Victoria Silverwolf -- The Showdown

This was a difficult one, but in the end my votes went to farntfar, mosaix and Robert.

Some special seede-cake thanks for the mentions and shortlistings Droflet, HB, Starbeast, Cory, johnnyjet, Coast and DJG (crowing about avian puns, eh?) and mega expulsive energy thanks for the votes Cathbad and CC!

EDIT: just seen I've got a stealth vote from mosaix -- mega-mage thanks!
 
Here's the result of the Ursa jury's deliberations, with the stories in posting order within the categories:


Honourable Mentions:
  • Old Man Jasper by Cathbad
  • The Showdown by Victoria Silverwolf
  • Between by Robert Mackay
Runners Up:
  • Monster of Frankenstein in "Speak No Evil" by Starbeast
  • Next please by Luiglin
  • Detached by HazelRah
Winners:
  • Timeline by Droflet
  • Interview with the Gatekeeper by johnnyjet
  • In Two Minds? by mosaix
 

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