Discussion -- July 2011 Challenge

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I don't think it really matters what order you put them in the bowl. Don't be limited by these hidebound traditions! Live dangerously, rebel against convention, pour the milk in first! That's about as much excitement as people our age can handle, but I think that even in your fragile condition you can weather it.

And then write us a couple of stories. You can begin with the small one first.
 
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For some reason, this month, I have found it difficult to get my head round both challenges. It may be because both are strongly SF, with little room for maneuver.

I think there is plenty of room to maneuver! Of course my elevator doesn't always reach all the way to the top and I often get stuck between the 12th and 14th floors and end up crawling around in the duct work of sanity. In fact the only reason I didn't go with my 1st impulse was because I couldn't figure out how to write about a caveman building a robot out of sticks and vines in just 75 words. :eek:

I am sure you will do much better!
 
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With my advanced years, it's bad enough remembering to put the cereal in the bowl before the milk; coming up with two, same genre stories as well, is likely to make the cat to think it's birthday's come early this month.

Yesterday I boiled the kettle, then proceeded to fill the coffee jar with water instead of my cup.:eek:

Can I join your club?
 
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digs: I am not sure how to explain how your story impacted me. Please do not take the following statement as criticism or a complaint as it was a truly powerful entry.

On the one hand I very very much wish that NICU and PICU technology was developed to the point that such a unit could be created to such a level! That there was a viable system of placing high risk infants into the care of a robotic unit that it could see to its needs and resuscitate it as needed while providing maternal warmth and emulation.

On the other hand the reason I so ardently wish such a thing was possible is because our youngest daughter was born 3 months premature and spent the same amount of time in the NICU. I nearly lost my wife and daughter both and such memories are extremely painful even after 5 years. Don't get me wrong both are doing great now and my daughter has grown from 12 inches and 1 pound 8 and a half ounces to a healthy 3 foot 6 inches and weights in around 38 pounds so all is well. However that was a hard period in our life and we nearly lost her a number of times and watched as other parents lost their premature babies. Sadly we even attended a few funerals of such.

Sorry for such a depressing post. Your story was wonderful and evocative. Which to be honest to me would be high praise. I hope some day to have something of mine cause an emotional reaction in someone.
 
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Thanks for your comment MstrTal - it's always gratifying to hear that your story's had an impact on someone. I suppose part of the beauty of writing is that the author never really knows quite what effect their work is going to have. I'm flattered that I managed to evoke something so powerful and important in you - and I'm glad that everything worked out for you and your family!

I'll avoid any explanation or discussion of my story until after voting, but cheers again for sharing your reaction.
 
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01001000 01001010 (HJ) – A bit of a reversal tale. The way I read it was a last solitary human hunted to the end, and the robot closing in to finish the job... but fails by way of shutting down on the job. A timely reminder that machines, even futuristic terminators might just malfunction, which is hardly surprising considering who made them in the first place!

01000010 01101111 01101110 01100101 01101101 01100001 01101110 (Boneman)
– A darkish one from Boneman, a good one too! I could see this one told as a slightly longer tale, not that it doesn’t work here. It still amazes me at how much can be squeezed into just 75 words. The apparent fear of a woman meeting a man, who just might be a trap – a killer robot in disguise – is twisted around when his proof of humanity is all it takes for her (or it) to show the sham of what she is.

01110100 01100101 01101100 01100110 01101111 01110010 01100100 (telford) – About time we had something lighter, and this does not disappoint. Somehow catching the cheesy feel of the Lost in Space show, and joyfully blowing it apart with the sound of breaking bones, and a near perfect last line.
 
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A fantastic entry by digs, very emotional. I really like it. :)

We have passed the magic 42 entries, and looks like we might get a few more before the end of the comp (tomorrow if my memory serves) I'm sure there are a few regulars who are yet to enter.
 
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Thanks, Perpetual man, as always. When I wrote it, it was sooo difficult to get down to 75 words, as my first draft was 143... If nothing else, this thread teached great editing skills!
 
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Only a little more than a day to go on this Challenge -- so for those who are still working on your stories, don't let that deadline slip by!

The quality is very high. Now if we can keep that up and get a few more stories ...
 
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I thought it might be fun considering I've been working on my 300 word story for a few hours to do the 75 worder live.

So my entry was written in first draft with immediate inspiration after reading Mosaix first post.

No edits, written in 7 minutes:eek:

Gulp!!
 
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Thank you so much PM. Your generousity never ceases to humble me. Cheers.
 
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At last! An idea.

One of these days, probably the 24th of the month in question, the inspiration (to exaggerate the genesis of the idea) will arrive a day late.


Now for the 300-worder (and the 1st of August)....
 
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01010010 01010011 01101100 01101001 01110111 01101001 01101110 01110011 01101011 01101001 (RSliwinski) – I thought this one caught the nature of a robot perfectly, perhaps with the vaguest hint of self evolution. For countless years the robot follows its programming, tending the garden for millennia, and yet inside as it goes through the motions it is aware of words like love and hate, but is unable to understand the feeling beneath the words.

01001010 00100000 01010010 01101001 01100110 01100110 (J Riff) – I liked the feel of this one, playing with our perceptions. The mechanical boredom of the robots, surveying Mars, and finding nothing. It almost gives the feeling of pointlessness in exploring a planet where there is nothing. But that is only what we or it can see, and there are always things beyond our perceptions, and sometimes we do more damage through the lack of understanding... It made me thing of Bradbury’s Martian Chronicles.

01010100 01000100 01011010 (TDZ) – I’m not completely sure what the underlying inference is in this story, but I felt that it was, perhaps an abused child and the response to her cries for help, from a protective robot. Obviously not governed by Asimov’s laws, the robots response is close to justice as a mechanical can come especially if the robots name was Jesus... great story!

01000010 01101111 01100010 (Bob) – A simply amusing story, a nice different tale. A repo-man with a job that just does not seem fair. Sent to the bad side of town to repossess something from an unsavoury group. Makes you wonder why they were so determined to hold onto their little toy eh?

01010011 01110100 01101111 01110010 01101101 01100110 01100101 01100001 01110100 01101000 01100101 01110010 (Stormfeather) – A poem! And what a poem too, I loved the use of words, especially in the second verse. The overall feel of time passing and the gradual change from man to machine, and even more the brief examination of how myths and legends can exaggerate the truth of a given situation. Great!

01000001 01101110 01101110 01100101 00100000 01001101 01100001 01110010 01110100 01101001 01101110 (Anne Martin) – Ahh the progress of technology, becoming smaller and smaller, doing more and yet somehow, through design and need becoming more and more redundant until in the end something that was once the shining pinnacle of the modern world, is just not needed any more. Thought the sudden cut off at the end, really gave the story a perfect ending too.
 
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I think you contributed on both counts.

Despite my doubts earlier this month, we've reached 50 stories! Maybe we'll have more, as there are a few hours left (but not very many).
 
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I think you contributed on both counts.

Despite my doubts earlier this month, we've reached 50 stories! Maybe we'll have more, as there are a few hours left (but not very many).

We seem to have reached 51!

I too had my doubts early on, fearing I had made 'Science Fiction' too specific. But, as usual, Chrons members have taken up the 'challenge' and put in a series of great and varied entries.
 
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We seem to have reached 51!

I too had my doubts early on, fearing I had made 'Science Fiction' too specific. But, as usual, Chrons members have taken up the 'challenge' and put in a series of great and varied entries.

What? Science Fiction too specific? After attempting a 'Kiplingesque' story on Nourishment this month felt like a free write!

Great job everyone. In my humble opinion the quality level of the stories has really spiked this month.
 
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